This is an interesting take on life. Who truly have control 24/7?

nah he mentioned somethin bout lookin at the parts of me I’m tryin to protect by callin everythin I crave fake. but I’m pretty sure he’s tellin his therapist…”jesus christ i should’ve became a podiatrist instead” after every session with me.

Powerfully penned, twofiftythree. This write has depth my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, twofiftythree. Been there a time or two. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

That kind of pressure and pain would be hard to deal with every day. Good spill

Kinda feels like a panic attack but slightly more subtle than those tend to be. Such strong feeling in this write. It’s evocative.

Great personification in this.
Feeling out of tune can feel stifling.

This is raw and open. You are alive and have a lot of things to do. Like driving when the light turns green.

I love this!
It does feel like we hack away at ourselves for the sake of expression.
When we don’t it doesn’t feel finished, at least for me.
Enjoyed the read

Excellent poetic testimony on what poetry and life can be with raw and unvarnished. Well written indeed.

John

This flow of thought makes me think of the mind transporting itself to ancient times when the rulers worship the sun and the moon. Nicely done