twofiftythree posted an update in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”

twofiftythree · 2025-12-30T13:00:43-06:00

limericks man from Austin there once was a man from Austin who said “I no longer drink. it’s a toxin” he stood his ground til the whiskey went down and rewrote his whole fuckin doctrine someone I adore there once was someone I adore that said “we can’t do this anymore” one drink one grin and I’m right back in my morals tossed on the floor

twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”

• 5 months ago

limericks

man from Austin

there once was a man from Austin
who said “I no longer drink. it’s a toxin”
he stood his ground
til the whiskey went down
and rewrote his whole fuckin doctrine

someone I adore

there once was someone I adore
that said “we can’t do this anymore”
one drink one grin
and I’m right back in
my morals tossed on the floor

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- RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
  4 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Simply fantastic, Dru!
  The meter may be a bit wonky, but your creative imagery, spot-on rhymes, and dancing rhythm make your efforts worthy a pound of Elvish Gold*
  I really got a very good laugh out of your unique “Only You” sense-of-humor … especially, with L4 ‘n 5, Limerick 2. ; )))
  ~··|··~
  Give the forms we’ve shared on here some generous ink, and it’s a masterful poet you’ll sonn be’s — what I think.
  Thanks, M’Friend, for joining-in, with “Happy New Year’s Wishes Sent Your Way!” ⁓ Richard