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Read MoreOh, please be emptybut if fate does not allowat least have a dogNumbers fascinateso does the screen on my phonewish I could greet youTime passes quicklyEnter the slow-down machine:the elevatorLet me ride beforethe incontinent Great Danebig stinky puddlefine, stop...
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Thanks, Peter.
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Take the stairs. Great write my friend.
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Thankfully the parking garage lets me escape the elevator most of the time. But sometimes when I need to go to the lobby to get mail, I walk down the ramps of the garage to avoid the dreaded elevator.
Thanks for the read and comments.
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Thanks, Adira. I went through a dry spell, but I’m coining back. I really appreciate the appreciation.
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Read Morescheming lust intrudesmy body uncomfortably respondsanxious and withdrawna sexual feeling announces it will relieve stressmelancholy mixed with urgency is trickyan assailent of the mindwept vulnerability you appeal to memy thoughts answer stirring the desirea beautiful man with good intentseeking...
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I love the gentle but powerful expression in this piece.
Favorite line: “Inside the sex storm I lose myself.” What a wonderful place to be.-
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hello beautiful Pink one thank you graciously 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian 💕
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Enjoyed this piece, thank you for sharing…
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hi Fred thank you graciously 💕
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hello lovely Mary thank you graciously 💕
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Read MoreI miss youAlmost as much as I miss me***It’s hard to use the washed out meaninglessness of wordsTo try to fill the vacuum of numbThey lay dullLike old yellow paintWithout warmth and scarce able to fill their purposeFadedEverything seems...
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hello dearest Joe love who you love and give yourself as fully as you can even if it’s just a friendship because being half there is no way to live trust me I know 💕
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Hello dear friend. There once was a time, but I survived. The wound left a scar but I healed. This was written then and is just a memory now.. Thank you for reading and caring🌼
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This is packed with so much emotion. It’s as if I could feel what you’re feeling.
Keep moving, keep trying, don’t let anyone tell you you’re not worth it.
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Thank you. Love is breathtaking, even in its failure. It was once a.long walk in the dark but I awoke, and now I breath again.
I appreciate the counsel of kind words. its the simple truths that get us through.🌼
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Read MoreI walked among the quiet stems, where sunlight touched the earth's hidden gems, and found a bloom, so still, so shy beneath the vast unchanging sky. It spoke no word's, yet told me all of how winds through branches call,...
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That’s really nice, Fred. Love how you use rhyme and imagery.
I’m guessing you’re into ‘silence’ by virtue of your first three poems.One thing I might suggest is organizing your piece into more traditional stanzas that emphasize your rhyme scheme as opposed to presenting the poem in a classic prose format. You can even play with spacing as such.
This is a strong and thoughtful piece
Meg
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Thank you for the kind words and sound advice Meg.
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Nicely penned, Fred. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, greatly appreciated..
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Elevators are awkward…you nailed it.🙏