Oh, please be empty
but if fate does not allow
at least have a dog
Numbers fascinate
so does the screen on my phone
wish I could greet you
Time passes quickly
Enter the slow-down machine:
the elevator
Let me ride before
the incontinent Great Dane
big stinky puddle
fine, stop on all floors
let the awkwardness increase
hi, effing hate you
Let 'vators evolve
light shows and custom music
whee, let's ride again
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PoetryElevator Prayers (Senryu)
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Summary:
I live in a mid-rise elevator building. Love my view, but hate the elevator.

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Elevators are awkward…you nailed it.🙏
Thanks, Peter.
Take the stairs. Great write my friend.
Thankfully the parking garage lets me escape the elevator most of the time. But sometimes when I need to go to the lobby to get mail, I walk down the ramps of the garage to avoid the dreaded elevator.
Thanks for the read and comments.
Ooh, goody! You posted! I miss Pink Speak.
These are excellent. And so true!!!!
Thanks, Adira. I went through a dry spell, but I’m coining back. I really appreciate the appreciation.