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Read MoreConsciousness unfolding, A peak inside My mind…Fast, then pauseAbsorb the absorbedA pull towards the edge The greater the mind power,Ohh, the betterSensual knot of slow chaos,Unraveling, untieUnpack meDon’t just stare…Explore a bit...
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Thank you for reading. I’m glad you have enjoyed this piece.
I think you’re doing a great job of making this place better for the future generation to come.
I admire the modern aspects of the website.x
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I appreciate you saying that<3
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✨✨✨✨
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That’s true, unfortunately.
We do need to see more new faces. The more input, the better.
I do like the place so far though. x
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Cleverly penned, Rosie. Excellent write really dig this one my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks again, Damian.
You’re like my number one super fan.
I’ll be reading some of your pieces soon. x
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Intelligence is sexy. Nicely worded and wonderfully executed.
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That’s true and I agree.
Thank you for reading. It means a lot to me. x
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You had me with the title! Fantastic word play here!
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I agree, it is captivating.
Thank you for reading. x
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Read Moreripped from the mouth of sound a gapin holewhere hammer should break bone hands dropivory grindin under skinsilence echos where it used to strike scale shattersedges crackinbroken teeth in the dark chords crawl forwarddraggin themselvesthru blood and tone I slam the weight downagainagainas...
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The “cut it off, cut it all the way off ” Just screams “I don’t want this anymore” This holds a lot emotion
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appreciate it
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I like the brutal choice on words.
I can sense a lot of toughness from the writer.
This is slightly mentally challenging in a way that captivates the reader.
Ready for some more…
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thank you Rosie
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“chords crawl forward
draggin themselves
thru blood and tone”Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend it always gets interesting when the piano is mentioned in your work. So many great lines but the one above just spoke to me. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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appreciate you Damian…always an easier write when involve piano.
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Read MoreBefore the house had learned its sorrow,before the clock grew fat with silenceand the chairs began to keep their counsel,there was a bird whose throatcould unlock the morning. She came not like a guest,but like a blessing that had forgotten...
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Favorite Stanza “Her voice was not a thing alone. It was bread for the hungry hour.”
“And love, that old thief,
crept up upon us in plain garments.
It entered by the back gate,
by the soft hand of habit,
by the little customs of living…
a glance, a shared cup,
the brush of a sleeve,
the certainty of being understood
without needing to speak too loudly.”
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Oh, thank you! I wrote the short form poem in the graphic many years ago about the same person, and this longer one after I came across the earlier one after not reading it for a very long time. I’m so glad you liked it!
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Read More“hail to embark” He waited at the stop, streetlight clouding above him,timetable long past meaning. In the window of the shelterhe caught himself —not a threat, just someone who’d missed too many departures. A bus passed ...
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Was he depressed or was he deep in thought and forgotten to raise his hand?
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Exactly! Excellent response there, Fia; thanks 🙏🏻🕊️
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I love this. I wrote something similar to this a while ago;)