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Am I weird if I got aroused by this? ‘Hope so…
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hi Jim good evening not at all I’m happy to have that affect thank you ❤️
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hello beautiful good evening thank you graciously ❤️
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Seductively dark, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian please forgive my tardiness ❤️
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Read Moregentle understanding, in your depths I searchto find a way to reconcilethe wild ways of the world and your nature Fatherinside me is conflicting feelingscreative need, you admonish me you prefer my softer sidecruel desire is the way of...
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It is very bewitching. When he tells you to stay calm so his monster does not come out. nice
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hello lovely Fia he told me last night after I posted my poem he said he knows I am capable of this mischief but he prefers my softer side…I asked him further about his varied sides and he says it’s all in what side I provoke will I get from him thank you for reading and commenting ❤️
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Crimsin, both tender and fiery this poem is. He tries to elicit your soft side but his true nature brings out the lioness. Great poem as I have come to expect from you.
John
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brilliant work. Powerful.
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Brenda, you amaze me with, “of others playing on different courts.” Love that line.
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A lovely & fragile piece of poetry Brenda. You always seem to amaze. Great work here.
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Benjamin Scraps replied to the topic DUP farewell playlist in the forum Underground Caverns
Favorite time o’ year, fer sure! Happy Halloween to all the Stars
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Benjamin Scraps wrote a new post
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Read MoreSlithered invitationwith diamond-cutvendettas.Sellswords carved carnival sideshow smilesdarting buttresseyes commencea lust for firesang the bird:conjecture cockfightsa finer company~requisite quislingdangles...
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Sounds rough and sad to me at the same time.
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Well now, Benjamin 🍷
Here, in this gobsmacking piece, is the exact point of issue I was making when you mentioned being “an undisciplined Free Verse poet” … there’s nothing about this poem but an excellent use of skillful poetic devices to command the reader to halt, proceed, imagine, and “feel” every moment, twist, turn, and diversion into your wondrously rendered world of abstract, mind-bending ambiguation, and I say this while sitting here bulge-eyed and jaw-dropped, not only from your phantasmagorical diction of verbosity, but how you’ve used white-space to create mood and imagery, while capturing and holding your readers’ spellbound attention.
Sheesh, M’Friend, it’ll take awhile to shake this one from my consciousness!
Good, really GOOD stuff, Syr Poet! Thanks for the rare experience! ⁓ Richard🖌
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really!