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Read MoreI love you so much more than words could ever say I know it sounds cliché but it’s the simple truth I could pen a million poems ‘til my dying day I’ve been trying to convey it since my days of youth I’ve...
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Thank you very much Styxian. I’ve been trying to have more control over that meter and syllable count the pieces flow, so it’s a little more work but I’m liking it so far.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
I find myself more immersed in trying to stay with that meter and syllable count with my latest work but I’m enjoying it.
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Professionally done, Wally. Each followed the same syllable count and I like the alternating rhyme scheme. And for the meaning, I think the chosen words are just right to convey the yearnings of the heart. 🙂
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Thank you Tim. I’ve been working more on that lately. I usually go off script or rhythm, or make the lines longer with internal rhyme added with wordplay. I have several goals for 2026 and hope to up my game.
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Read MoreThe big bad heart “Maybe I possess the big bad heart that thunders within this wolf body.” The big bad tongue “Maybe I can lick clean your bones with my big bad tongue!” The big bad she-wolf “Maybe...
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Wolves are back! Big bad and naughty wolves. The Wolves you are writing about seem to be more seductive and haunting than threatening.
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I am slogging at the library right now reading through the first draft making revisions. About to transcribe it from my notebook to the computer so I can send it to you finally. Ughhhhhh writing is such a process, Elke! Haha 😂
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Read MoreThe silence is deafening, and profound Her absence makes the night feel so cold The air escaped his lungs now he drowns In the depths of hope taking a toll He prays amidst the ruins and ashes Yearning for that burning eternal flame Like impressions...
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Beautiful and a sorrowful piece ❤️
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Thank you Fia. It’s those writes that haunt that more profound…and everlasting.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian, I’m kind of fond of this one for some reason.
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This is almost a cautionary tale. One never knows how life will go when someone you once imagined as a safe haven and one so desired disappears. Well done, Wally.
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Very true Tim. Sometimes unrequited or absent love makes for poetry with depth and longing.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Read Moretwinning knots of expression, winding themselves together on the atmospheresouls of no regard, gifting each other passiondeeply reaching into the wealth of the heartfinding thereselves in one anothers eyesfruition of desire long repressedcomes slowly but with a fierce strengthoddly...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here ❤️
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I love the way you put this story together. A love intertwined.
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hello beautiful Fia good evening thank you graciously for such a lovely comment ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Amazing dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you for embracing me on this dark write ❤️
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This is darkly charged and unapologetic, leaning hard into seduction and danger without blinking. I like how the poem owns its fascination with shadow, letting desire and menace speak in the same breath.
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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously I love your comment ❤️
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Well now, this is quite loaded with some serious wording! Not easy I am sure, to carry the rhymes along as you did.
And, it’s a rewarding read, that I enjoyed very much.