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    sin'sations

    darkly I come daring you to see meresist the urge to touchmy cold would burnsalacious thoughts draws us togetherbut darlin I'm not prettypain overflows and makes me jealousa quality I resentquietly I listen to your thoughtsyou're a woman's manI...

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    starshine

    the moon you dance toothe stars you weep fora cosmos of facesbut one starstruck angel captivatedserenity in a smileethereal qualities, summer sunshinebut the sun can burnand you learned beauty concealsdirty little secretslies of omissionthe flocks of admires you have...

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    • “…blow your heart to bits” genius work dear. 😉

      • thank you dearest Jim this is from my imagination I wouldn’t aspire to do as such just the way I’m feeling right now thank you ❤️

        • Sure, I get it. Fiction is real in our minds, at times. 🙂

          • really I just write whatever comes to mind so I don’t stifle my muse then there is my bipolar too to consider… so sometimes what I write is kooky lol ❤️

            • It’s a great self-therapy tool I think. I write for that reason sometimes too. I feel better today, not 100% yet, but well on my way. 💖🙏
              For me my fantasy world fulfills me in a few good ways.
              Be well Ms C.

    • Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    crave

    synthetic love patheticfeelings made of plasticrealistically inclined what do you know about fantasyconnecting with your depthssoul of souls realizing loveit is with deep affection I talk to youfaulty need to pleaseassaulting my pridedisaterous beauty inside desire's whimblame the dreamsmy...

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    Point of No-Return (Collaboration with Duhsjaak )

    Point of No-Return Like pearls your tears glisten on the leavesA masterpiece of nature's magicSo marvelous and yet so tragicBecause it was us who caused your grief  We live as if there was no tomorrowGlobal warming and droughts we acceptAs progress'...

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    • This is one amazing collaboration. WOW! The lyrics, music and image are stellar. Great work here!

    • Fabulous work yoy two very gifted artists. 🙏

    • @visions of Insanity
      Also on behalf of Sappho, I would like to thank you for listening.
      The lyrics are about something we both care deeply about. And she was the one to write this inspiring poem. And artwork of course.

      Thank you so much for your very fine compliments. They go a long way!

      Kind regards, Sappho and Gus

    • I said it before. Wonderful collaboration ❤️

    • Powerful penned, Elke and Gus. Excellent collaboration you two. Great lyrics, Elke and excellent music, Gus. Your guitar tone has a little Neil Young vibe going on. Top notch both of you. Appreciate you, both.

      Damian

    • I bow most reverently to Sappho ‘n Gus 🙏

      Stunningly beautiful, You Two, in every sense of the word.
      Artwork choice, title, and the Envelope Form in its abba rhyme-scheme (with spot-on and soft rhymes), work perfectly together, just as writing and musical skills came together in rendering this lovely, impacting virtual masterpiece in homage to Mother Earth’s ever dwindling beauty and life sustaining wonders.

      Simply, an enthralling co-write … love it deeply!
      Thank you both! ⁓ Richard🖌

      Nits:
      (Check V1-L3, “get” may have been meant as “yet”. Final stanza, L1, should “plead” be “plea”?) 🤓

      • I bow with gratitude to you, dear Richard! A breathtaking comment and the appreciation of a writer like you means a world to me!
        I have gratefully implemented your kind suggestions for improvement. As English is not my mother tongue I appreciate this all the more! 🙏

        • What lovely sentiments you share, Elke …thank you ever-so warmly.

          You’re a beautiful person and wonderfully enjoyable poetess!
          A Most Happy New Year to You! ⁓ Richard🖌

    • I’ve written a few from this vein myself and no doubt we’ll write many more, trying to get people to pay attention. The both of you did an amazing job on this. 🙌

      • There is a lot of work to be done to raise awareness of nature’s uniqueness and to call for its protection. But we won’t give up!
        Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my dear fellow campaigner, for your wonderful comment!

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    bleed

    in my weeping time I forget who I amthe hurt too much to bearbaring all to feel the sting of rejectioninside myself falldeep into my fantatical worldsa place of wonderin my night terrors, the demons enter with realitysadness abounds...

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    • Chère C.,
      It almost looks like as if you are tapping from a different source.
      Goes for the art work too.

      Less black and white with sharp divisions, more dark gradually turning light. I hope my English does what I hope.
      I mean it as a compliment anyway. You warm me to your art. Love it a lot!

      Keep on keeping on said Curtis Mayfield.
      Warm regards, Gus

    • Harshly aware

    • I remember feeling like this. It was a beautiful and cruel woman who made me feel that way. I have learnt men are equally as cruel.
      Regards
      James

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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