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Read More“In the company of imageries within my castle, I voice for everyone my next poetic verse. All the empty halls listen and echo my passion, And in darkly rich verse I immerse.” Through the courtyard, pulls up a hearse, Beneath the arms of stone...
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Read MoreThe bed thumps rhythmically beneath you while youmake a grocery listand notice the weirdwater stain by the edge of the ceiling fanthe pace increases soyou stifle a half-assed moan and tilt your pelvis and wonderis thisis this…and you wait...
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian, I appreciate you right back.
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Oh-Wow! I absolutely loved this, Betty. Best wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl, published erotica author
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Thank you HJ. Back atcha!
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Betty love your writes. Wooo
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Thank you my sweet friend.
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Your pieces are always so stimulating Lady, to tight
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Hey ME!
It is tight as hell, my friend! (Kegals doncha know.)
Thanks my friend. Good to see you.
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What! Betty graces us with some creative writing here! Or, also known as Lillith has entered Eden! What!
“forearm against your pelvis” = Details are everything, and this is exquisitely precise to make it a real moment. That bit of control is boss!
Well you had mentioned that you were going to concentrate on erotica. So that explains this humdinger of a write!
The way you make it so realistic, without any overly porn promotion, shows your skill, ahem, at creative writing.
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My sweet, innocent brother-from-another-mother.
No, this was just some older stuff dusted off.
I have yet to write the porn.
It’s gonna be like a Gallagher show, you’ll need visqueen sheeting to avoid the splash zone.
JUST KIDDING…
MaybeHey, bro, thanks. I fucking adore you. Your critique matters and I really appreciate you for it. Thank you for being a fucking icon.
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Icon? Don’t be calling me no foreign little car made by Hundai !! I’m tall dammit!
Okay okay.
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Gotta love the raw honesty spilling onto the page without restraint. “Are those your toes curling in the sheets?” it’s that damn good.
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LOL, thanks Wally. I appreciate you!
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, it always helps knowing someone understands and has our back. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Chère C.,
In the Netherlands, we believe that everyone has ‘een rugzakje’. A backpack, but the addition of ‘je’ can’t be translated as far as I know. It’s there to indicate that sometimes it’s heavy and sometimes less. If I make any sense.In this rugzakje we all carry things from present and past (mostly).
The thing for others, is to accept other rugzakjes too. I hear what you say, and at the same time I know that there will be more people who will support and embrace you.The days will be getting longer. I hope that more hours of light will strengthen you.
Warm regards, Gus
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A great piece written for your husband. Nicely executed!
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Read MoreI love you so much more than words could ever say I know it sounds cliché but it’s the simple truth I could pen a million poems ‘til my dying day I’ve been trying to convey it since my days of youth I’ve...
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Well now, this is quite loaded with some serious wording! Not easy I am sure, to carry the rhymes along as you did.
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Thank you very much Styxian. I’ve been trying to have more control over that meter and syllable count the pieces flow, so it’s a little more work but I’m liking it so far.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
I find myself more immersed in trying to stay with that meter and syllable count with my latest work but I’m enjoying it.
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Professionally done, Wally. Each followed the same syllable count and I like the alternating rhyme scheme. And for the meaning, I think the chosen words are just right to convey the yearnings of the heart. 🙂
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Thank you Tim. I’ve been working more on that lately. I usually go off script or rhythm, or make the lines longer with internal rhyme added with wordplay. I have several goals for 2026 and hope to up my game.
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This is so dark and haunting. fav line is “Their shrill shadowed the echo through these hollow halls,
“The dark-suited burial conveyance led amiss of a poet’s demise.”