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Stellar writing…
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I’m glad you like it, Drieks! Your comments are awesome! Thanks for reading.
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You make me smile!
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Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
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Thanks, Thomas! Glad you liked it.
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Brilliantly penned, DK. You’ve got mad skills my friend, with the pen of course. Clarification is important sometimes. lol. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m so glad you think my skills are ‘mad’, Damian. No clarification necessary! Thanks for reading and following me!
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Mmmm…the gift and the curse maybe?
This vibe was very imaginative!!
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Glad you think so, Naaj – definitely a curse. I appreciate you reading!
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Oh shit…
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Idk how this poem slipped out of my radar, but I am glad to catch up and “hunt” few of your poems.
They say a good writing is a writing which makes you feel the want to fuck, destroy and create something all at once. I guess I am having that feeling again!
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I’ve never heard that before, but I’m glad to bring you there!
I like the concept of being ‘hunted’ because it metaphorically represents what happens all the time in reality. The tricky part, from a girl’s perspective, is getting the right person to hunt you and avoiding the wrong ‘predator’.Thanks for reading!
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Read MoreIt had been months since they witnessed the beauty of the stars twinkling in the sky. The moon itself was already a glow before the war, and now it is lost behind the constant overcast, which lingers....
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I can seriously feel the tension in this piece, Daniel. You’re building this beautifully. My recommendations are to look at other options for the word, ‘snow’. It becomes redundant. Also, Chloe might refer to the men in the shadows as ‘bad boys’, but Gwen and the narrator may want a more specific term – something more specific or sophisticated and relevant to the circumstances.
Your writing is compelling
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Meg, thank you as always. Good thing it is only a freewrite and I’ll be putting it together as a more tuned first draft. I see this turning into a novella.
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Read MoreYou’re sitting there stirring, quiet but also quaking Longing as the emotions fracture at the core Trying to keep decorum without breaking Fighting the impulse that’s always asking for more Suddenly you find yourself squirming silently Like lithe rhythmic writhing riding this tingling down When...
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A phenomenal write Wally
Good to see you again 🙌Onward
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Thank you Poet. It’s good to be here.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I appreciate your comments.
Glad to be here.
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Thank you very much Adira.
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Read MoreIt is post-apocolyptic America. Sometime in the 21st century, months after a thermal nuclear exchange between Russia and the United States, when nuclear winter had settled and that dark, thick veil over the sun had thinned to...
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Read MoreThe voiceless tranquility of our flame,our souls searing with passion still,yearning an isolation as silent as our emotions. This flameless romance, this desert - windswept of all fertility,populous with negativity. A fondness for solitude now,I withdraw from her as I say,"where...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the longing in your words my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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