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Read MoreOnly in candlelight can I see you. Only then can I lay eyes on your perfect form. Only then can the glinting emeralds in your eyes cast their spell on me. Only by the candle flame can I hear...
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Fantastic!
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There’s a spiritual side to this I think you caught. Really creative writing here. Nice job!
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Das ist wirklich ein Meisterwerk, Daniel!
Like Tim, I appreciate the spiritual side of your writing. I understand the candlelight as a metaphor for our own inner light. The light in our hearts allows us to see other persons like they really are, beyond their appearance, social roles or status symbols. Brilliant!-
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Ein Meisterwerk? Awww, ich danke dir so sehr, Elke! Warten Sie bis zu diesem Wochenende, Sie werden in der Tat das Eröffnungskapitel zu einem Meisterwerk haben. Dass ich posten werde. Und dieses Gedicht hat mit den beiden Charakteren dieser Geschichte zu tun.
Thank you so much, Elke!Daniel
Gotisch-Surrealistisch
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Spectacular write with amazing wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously Damian forgive my tardy response you are appreciated 💕
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Powerful and hot.
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hello dearest Thomas sorry it took me so long to get back to you thank you graciously 💕
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hello beautiful Mary sorry for my late response thank you so much 💕
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thank you graciously lovely poetess 💕
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Read MoreToo often have those shocking, fatalistic images haunted me;too often have I been forced to confront the unimaginable;emotions flung aside while practicality rode out each storm.Now, the thoughts of those could-have-beens and might-still-bestwist and turn on themselves,bending my mind...
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This is very good.
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So well written. This is one of you best. and I remember the pencil writing years, so unsure what to keep and what to change.
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Powerfully penned, Ellie. Into the book it belongs! This is an amazing write, thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I would have been terrible with the ink and quill. I probably edit everything 5 times (maybe more) and then post and edit more. Nice touch with the
Mobius strip! Haven’t that in awhile! What ifs are horrible? I have deep regrets both of what I have and haven’t done. Doing stuff tomorrow is just…bullshit. Excuses. Excellent piece. -
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I love that closing stanza, I’ve often thought something similar, solidifying those feelings in ink can be haunting.
Great work.
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian