I like it….sad but honest.
🙏

A heart-touching write!

OMG… you died…

Powerfully penned, Meg. Pulls at the heartstrings my friend, incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

DEAD CLIMAX….

Macabre ‘n cold, necrophiliac’s art,
bizarre love-making to an unbeating heart.
Mutuality is most that it lacks …
thus, it always ends in a “dead climax.”

See, Megan,
How pervertedly alluring you stimulate my warped poetic senses? Heehee-HEEE!👺😈

From the span of scrumptiously lip-lickingly erotic tales to mournfully sad Free Verse poetry, your fantasy imbued ink never skips a beat.
One might be left wondering what unfathomably deep, magical well you draw your brilliantly imaginative scenarios from … yet, even if I had a deliciously palastable bucketful, I’m not sure I’d know what to do with them.

Of course, your artwork choice and title are sheer perfection in leading us into the atmospheric aura that follows … imagery-gorged, offset lines create continuous interest, assuring every millisecond of attention will be held from one staccato line ’til gobsmacking finalé.

Even in death you deny him the arduous warmth he always craved
Ever, enviously yours! ⁓ Rascal🥂

Thank you so much for that, SeaCat! I appreciate the read!

I know one thing
I wouldn’t be flaccid around you

Unusual vulnerability and I love that

BIG LIKE

Sam…Sam shy my ass. Well her ass. This was a two-flame burner for me. Very hot and a little funny too.

Yup… you are good at turning things on …

hello beautiful poetess this is incredibly sexy I love the build up of the meet and the anticipation of all the things he’s going to do to you… very sensual erotic and hot a very intense read to say the least 💕

yes… I still have the umbilical cord…

of course… they told me the other end belonged to my twin so I have been looking for 57 years… well, 56 … the first year I could not really walk much

Powerfully penned, Sam. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful work. Tremendous

Brilliant storytelling, Meg. Appreciate you.

Damian

Once again, Megan🎖

Mystery, excitement, hardcore, tender … whatever/whenever perfection in a scenario demands, your pen seems to instinctively command visual diction with the stroke of a master artist’s brush.

You continually assure us of your raconteuric skills on any level in every theme, breathing life into the utmost sensual or deeply erotic scene, to characters’ personalities that take on verisimilitude as though we could reach out and touch them, smell their breath, feel their heat, actually hear the emotional timbre in their voices, and see the colors of their eyes, as their pupils dilate and flex.

Simply, enviously brilliant, Lady-Author … you’re provenly the best!
How very fortunate we are you share! ⁓ Richard🖌

Richard, it’s so wonderful to have you following along with me. Your comments blow my mind. You make me so happy! Sorry for the delay in the next chapter. Hopefully this week.

xoxoxo

Okay there is a lot of backstabbing and revenge in this series. I like it, Sam. Now I have to catch that plane. lol