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Read MoreComes now my midnight lover’s callthat softly echoes down the hall.I pull the sheets and lift my head,then slowly saunter out of bedso careful not to wake your sleepwith all the secrets that I keep.He meets me at the...
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And death, for that matter.
But yeah, I know what you mean, Peter!xoxo
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Powerful fucking poem. Great work.
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I’m so glad you think so, Thomas! Thank you!
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I think I’d be in sin every part of the day.. if the night started like this! LOL Great poem!!
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Thank you so much, Christoper! I’m so glad you liked it.
xoxo
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Awesome poem Kitten. You sure know know to heat up a page.
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I’m so glad you think so, Kenn! Thanks for reading my stuff!
xoxo
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Whew!!! Intense indeed
Very well written.Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj! Thanks for reading!
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“GULP!” 😳
Well, Dear Poetess,
So much for the site’s pornagrophy rules … LOL!I’m not so sure it’s all a sin
because done over and again,
there’s a beauty in every stroke
of throaty moans sooo softly spoke.“You hesitate, but in the end,
I smother you in evening sin.
By midnight moon, you drown content
between my legs as I repent.” (there’s nothin’ better’n making-up)Not a lot of metaphor, but loads of excellent imagery, giddy flow, smoothly laid syntax, succulent stimulation, consistent 8-count meter, spot-on rhyme scheme ‘n art choice, and presentation appeal.
It’s more than a little obvious this is definitely not your first poetry rodeo … masterfully done, Lady-Poet.Now, excuse me, please, while I dip my head in a bucket of ice! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Wow! Wow! Wow!
What a review, Rascal, and thank you for that! I’m honored. I think you covered everything from mechanical technique to emotional effect. Wait… there are rules on this site? Shit. Let me look that up. Hold up, someone’s at the door carrying fuzzy handcuffs – and they’re not in uniform. Let me take a rain check on that.Rascal, this review is amazing. I’m giddy. Thank you!
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Mmmm!
Something must have inspired me … can’t imagine what it was? ; p-
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I hope you can figure it out…
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Read MoreCarefully, quickly unbuckle your beltLicking your length and patting your peltIgnore the conductor requesting his fareMagma is rising; you're just about thereAgony bellows; I muffle your moansXanadu Railroad, I'm riding you home
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My kinda girl….funny and naughty write🙏
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Get on board, Peter
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I almost Tchou Tchou all over her face. 😀
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You naughty boy
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In Xanadu did Kubla Khan
A stately pleasure-dome decree
On railroad tracks I climax
Between them wide I do foresee
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I mean, did trains exist when Kubla Khan was hanging out in China?
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I don’t know… ask Samuel Taylor Coleridge…your Xanadu always reminds me of his Kubla Khan without the trains of course..
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Hmmm
I’ll have to look at that
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This is very sweet, short and nice. Good passion flow. Keep up the inspiration.
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Thank you so much, Navina! I’m glad you liked it.
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You welcome Dampkitten
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Read MoreIt’s four in the morning And I could not sleepI’m thinking of you But I could not weepYou left me cold In the land of the livingMy music you took As I lay there dyingI heard that you left With the man I did...
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It’s never the heart that gets broken, just the mind.It never returns to its former self but wabi-sabi.
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Thank you for the thoughtful comment Peter
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Nice Ode to Cohen. I’m a fan of his work. I even have a recording of me reading “Democracy” Dig this. Appreciate you .
Damian
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Yes… I guess you learn something every time you make a friend… I didn’t know anything about Cohen before then…. Now I do.. thank you for the comment Damian
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Hauntingly?!?…. I like this word… now I have to write a story about that
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OMG, I had never heard that song either until that competition. I wrote something for it too, but it sucked. Thank God you came to get me, Sam. You do realize that I’m not wearing a damn thing under this raincoat, right?
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Behave yourself.. you know that some people are telling me that as Starsrite caretaker that I should be more serious around here… fuck those people… I did not create starsrite to be an asshole… I want to have fun…. Now about that raincoat…
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Make me rain, Sam
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Saying that this gave me goosebumps would be the understatement of the year, Sam.
This was beautiful in such a devastating way..
Well done.
Xoxo,
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Ok you gave me goosebumps with your comment… saying this with all my heart … thank you
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I’m such a giver. 🙂 Most welcome!!
xoxo
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