If only life was like that…lol

Powerful fucking poem. Great work.

I think I’d be in sin every part of the day.. if the night started like this! LOL Great poem!!

Awesome poem Kitten. You sure know know to heat up a page.

Whew!!! Intense indeed
Very well written.

Naaj

“GULP!” 😳

Well, Dear Poetess,
So much for the site’s pornagrophy rules … LOL!

I’m not so sure it’s all a sin
because done over and again,
there’s a beauty in every stroke
of throaty moans sooo softly spoke.

“You hesitate, but in the end,
I smother you in evening sin.
By midnight moon, you drown content
between my legs as I repent.” (there’s nothin’ better’n making-up)

Not a lot of metaphor, but loads of excellent imagery, giddy flow, smoothly laid syntax, succulent stimulation, consistent 8-count meter, spot-on rhyme scheme ‘n art choice, and presentation appeal.
It’s more than a little obvious this is definitely not your first poetry rodeo … masterfully done, Lady-Poet.

Now, excuse me, please, while I dip my head in a bucket of ice! ⁓ Rascal🖌

Mmmm!
Something must have inspired me … can’t imagine what it was? ; p

My kinda girl….funny and naughty write🙏

I almost Tchou Tchou all over her face. 😀

In Xanadu did Kubla Khan

A stately pleasure-dome decree

On railroad tracks I climax

Between them wide I do foresee

This is very sweet, short and nice. Good passion flow. Keep up the inspiration.

It’s never the heart that gets broken, just the mind.It never returns to its former self but wabi-sabi.

Nice Ode to Cohen. I’m a fan of his work. I even have a recording of me reading “Democracy” Dig this. Appreciate you .

Damian

Hauntingly?!?…. I like this word… now I have to write a story about that

OMG, I had never heard that song either until that competition. I wrote something for it too, but it sucked. Thank God you came to get me, Sam. You do realize that I’m not wearing a damn thing under this raincoat, right?

Make me rain, Sam

Saying that this gave me goosebumps would be the understatement of the year, Sam.

This was beautiful in such a devastating way..
Well done.
Xoxo,
~P.G💋