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Read MoreI. In Jade Relief Within verdant stillness, it breathes—exhalation of peace in stone.Silence carves itself into serenity,each line straightens to temporality. Eyes half-closed to becoming,he sees what cannot be unlearned:the world forever shaping itselfaround folded edges of release. Calm is not absence...
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Okay, you earned a “Wow!”. this is very good. The second one is my favorite, because it seems like the peak of them all.
Even, the fourth reads like an epilogue, btw. Planned? A solid quartet of strong writing.
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Beautifully penned, S. Excellent collection of poems my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Libellule, this poem is so artfully crafted and an exquisite blend of light, artistry and form. There s gentle flow here that felt like reflections on the art so gently scribed I could feel what you saw in an emotional way. Truly great poetry.
John
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I like the way you use the particles in this. Hate breeds hate.
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Not always and certainly not any specific group, but unless there is a radical produced it usually continues. Thanks Lady
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Well done Me… great flow… resonates with me
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The great thing is that tomorrow is a variable that continually produces others. We can all change and produce better, there isn’t perfection originally within flesh, we have to earn it. Thanks Lady missed you
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Read MoreWithin verdant stillness, it breathes—exhalation of peace in stone.Silence carves itself into serenity,each line straightens to temporality. Eyes half-closed to all becoming,he sees what cannot be unlearned:the world forever shaping itselfaround folded edges of release. Here, calm is not absence but...
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The jade Buddha sits in silence. “Silence carves itself into serenity,”
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Beautifully penned, S. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Libellule, only a poet as gifted as you can take a jade carving and make it into a journey into the heart of timelessness itself. There is truth here that lives and breathes in the air of your poet’s soul.
John
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Read MoreBeneath the cedar hush, it stands—this tablet of time, moss-inked and worn,where rain rehearses its calligraphyon every solemn groove of gray.Kanji breathe with quiet resolve,each stroke struck with monk patience,the language of remembered stonerecalling forgotten rhymes anew.No voice speaks,...
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Thanks… so glad you felt it… this is an AI generated image… but I just got back from a month in Japan… a solemn retreat from things… got a lot of writing done…
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Masterfully penned, S. Another phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can tell that trip had a deep impact on you. Love this 4-part piece of work.