Your pen has power, Naajir. You weld it like a trident of discourse. Because you see that discourse and use it against itself.
Always well spoken with a keen wisdom.

Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. This has a flow that would make great song lyrics. Nicely done per usual brother. Appreciate you.

Damian

We read this thinking of all the people now wanting to claim innocence, The supporters of Nero and Caligua who supported the emperor even after discovering their madness. The mad rulers campaign on their sickness and still found themselves in power. There is no depth to the madness, you lose yourself using the normal routes to navigate. Tight

hello dearest Naajir great wordplay here and a beautiful message while being a good look into your soul ❤️

Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write with amazing wordplay my friend. Much respect always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Always searching for an opportunity to catch a photo of the old man on the mountain. My camera is never ready! He is quicker than he looks.

Intricate phonetics both personal and universal. Top notch word play, both fierce & peaceful. Much respect for this wilderness of word!

Excellent crafting here. Such a strong entry to compliment this site.
It does have an outdoorsy feel to it, but that could be the picture leading me that direction. At any rate,the words build the bear!

A beautiful blend of wit and wisdom, wrapped in a lilting montage of smooth vocals and kick-ass music for the heart, mind and soul. Wicked stuff, and I say, if you’ve got it, flout it, baby, flout it!

OMG! I felt I was there! Great bestial erotic fantasy! xxx

Then it did as it was supposed to, there’s nothing wrong with a little aggression. Thanks Lady

Every pussy throughout life needs to catch hell every once in awhile.

Powerful work.

Haha, stop playing around in people’s dreams lol
Nice flow

Hahaha, the transition from the giver of life to the taker, from the peacemaker to the shit starter. The power of making a coward a brave individual, with the right plan a beggar could live comfortably. We want to discuss this with you soon, tight

Brilliantly penned, Naaj. This is a powerful write my friend, I dig the layers and incredible storytelling brother. This is next level good, much respect sir. Appreciate you.

Damian

I would have never imagined thinking of a firearm this way. I love the way you kept writing it in a verse of the testament as if you scribing it into the book

Incredible write. Totally captivating for the reader. It is bold but not violent. It simply speaks of the potential for…
This is a great write, Naajir. Very thick with detail and circumstance. Awesome.

Man, I hate guns! Loud popping sounds in general trigger me a bit. I remember a time when we fought with bats, bricks, and small knives. Some were good with their fists. My main criticism about self-defense with a gun is that some idiot will pull that sucker in a panic and shoot himself or some bystander. A lotta folks don’t even consider that. There was a time when only specialized warriors held that kind of fear & respect. Now any ol’ fool can be a serious danger. The Devil’s world in a nutshell. Great topic!