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a very dark offering with a perfect flow ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wicked piece Benjamin. I love halloween as well. Great delivery!
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Read MoreI haven't been home in a while. It still looks the same. The fake facade that everything is bright and beautiful when the beauty is an illusion, hiding all the decay. Anyone who has a heightened sense of smell...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling as always my friend. The final battle was intense. Seems like a bittersweet ending to me. Even in death the mother left a mark. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I thought about that even the evilest of parents may have one streak of kindness left.
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Ouch’ that’s taking mother love a tad too far methinks .. Just who’s side are you on he asked? Matricide, she replied .. Just ripe for Halloween my queen🩸🖤🐦⬛🐦⬛🦇🦇😎👍
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You are correct, my friend. I was trying my hand at writing darkness. lol I am not good at it, but it wrapped it up neatly. Thank you, <3
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A very engaging story.
Troubling and sinister.
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Thank you, Knight;))
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More
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Thank you
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Thank you for the good news Fia 🙏🏻
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Sorry about the issue.
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
A website is ever evolving so, no problem Fia! 💕
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
beautiful thank you ❤️
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Welcome and I do apologize
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it’s fine I’m sure keeping this site running is tedious and as much a miss DU i’m getting the flow of this
Star ❤️
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Thanks, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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How cool is that .. I Know for a fact that besides me, there will be many others who are grateful for this update and accompanying good news .. Neville 😎👍
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Thanks Neville;))
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Read MoreDue to a new plug-in for Audio Video . The audio to the poems has been removed, but the poem is still on the site. Do not remove the poem. Edit the poem and re-upload the audio. If you are...
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Thank you for the update Fia. I was wondering what had happened.
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Nicely done. Love Halloween as well, and it seems the others are having fun with it.