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    Icicled Emotions

    Eyes so fixed, they glaciated in sight of the arctic reality!   Icicles hanging from my eyelids before the wintry glow of the sun, which is nowhere near to thaw tearcicles.   These frozen chimneys, when thawed, billow the black smoke of my breakdown!   The alpenglow on the snow-capped summits of...

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    Old Sunlight

    Old Sunlight Time, it did, for sure stand    still there .. The mirrors well and truly cracked, with dead flowers laid upon the empty window sill there and tired old sunlight straining through torn net curtains while a single dust mote pirouettes    then dies there .. The same old photographs with...

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    Renege

    My dearMy love for you is getting weakerLike connecting to a distant Bluetooth speakerNo receiverSorry for the analogyBut to me our bond is like yesterday's technologySo my apologies This might be the last timeThis might be the last timeThis might...

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    • This sounds so good. Your writing is amazing.

    • This is an amazing accomplishment, my friend. All of the references to technology, and the way you use them is like candy — so sweet and perfect. I just want to stop for a moment and admire phrases like, “We’re floppy disks in the age of air,” or, “The signal fades like a VHS tape,”and so many others. So beautiful in so many ways: the words, the music all meld into a magical achievement. Why the hell aren’t you famous?

      • Thank you FlatDaddy! I wanted to write something fun and light. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.

        • Enjoyed it? I jumped up and kissed the screen! Okay, I didn’t do that, but I could have. Just marvelous work.

    • Cleverly penned, Drieks. Amazing lyrics my friend loved the technological wordplay. Excellent work as always with the arrangement. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • FD said I had to come, listen/read your words. I am so glad I did. Loved the word play, the technology references, damn, the whole song. Many snaps and a bag of chips!!!

      Curt

      • Hey there Curt! Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me 🙏🏻

    • Superb work. Powerful.

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    Nothing Significant

    Today has been so heavyI'm sinking into the substrateOf everything gone wrong.Colliding into emptiness.And,I'm nostalgicFor somewhereI've never been.Some kinda fairy taleTo fall into.I amAlways,Present and prescient,All too awareOf where I'm supposed to beCompared to whereI am.Wistfully wishing you weren'tSo...

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    • hello dearest Nolan the secret is there is no fairy tale life that insidious feeling you have will find you disappointed even in the best places our problems find us…I’m not trying to be a downer but it’s true great write ❤️

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