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Neville wrote a new post
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Read MoreOld Sunlight Time, it did, for sure stand still there .. The mirrors well and truly cracked, with dead flowers laid upon the empty window sill there and tired old sunlight straining through torn net curtains while a single dust mote pirouettes then dies there .. The same old photographs with...
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Thanks a million brother T .. that’ll do far more than just nicely .. Cheers, Neville 😎👍
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Neville. Love the layers and depth of this write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cheers Damian .. Neville 😎👍
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This sounds so good. Your writing is amazing.
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Thank you so much Fia! 🙏🏻
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This is an amazing accomplishment, my friend. All of the references to technology, and the way you use them is like candy — so sweet and perfect. I just want to stop for a moment and admire phrases like, “We’re floppy disks in the age of air,” or, “The signal fades like a VHS tape,”and so many others. So beautiful in so many ways: the words, the music all meld into a magical achievement. Why the hell aren’t you famous?
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Thank you FlatDaddy! I wanted to write something fun and light. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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Enjoyed it? I jumped up and kissed the screen! Okay, I didn’t do that, but I could have. Just marvelous work.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Drieks. Amazing lyrics my friend loved the technological wordplay. Excellent work as always with the arrangement. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian 🙏🏻
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FD said I had to come, listen/read your words. I am so glad I did. Loved the word play, the technology references, damn, the whole song. Many snaps and a bag of chips!!!
Curt
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Hey there Curt! Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me 🙏🏻
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thank you for your kind words Thomas!
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Read MoreToday has been so heavyI'm sinking into the substrateOf everything gone wrong.Colliding into emptiness.And,I'm nostalgicFor somewhereI've never been.Some kinda fairy taleTo fall into.I amAlways,Present and prescient,All too awareOf where I'm supposed to beCompared to whereI am.Wistfully wishing you weren'tSo...
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hello dearest Nolan the secret is there is no fairy tale life that insidious feeling you have will find you disappointed even in the best places our problems find us…I’m not trying to be a downer but it’s true great write ❤️
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Read MoreSwimming through a sea of ice and glass... Trying so hard to let go of the past... Crimson swirls do glisten and shine... Oh the pain is so sublime... From my bleeding soul... Does a scarlette river flow... Let's me know I'm still alive... Tells me...
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Powerfully penned, SW. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The voice in our head, the legions that rule can take over if we’re not careful. I fight my own war when negative self-talk invades.
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hello dearest Tim I am fortunate actually it took many miracles to get me to this age so many brushes with death…nature is beautiful to look at I guess I just have to remember my time will come no matter where I am and all I can do is do my best until then I am just feeling my mortality thank you my friend ❤️
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Vivid and sharp. Fantastic work.
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good morning dearest Thomas thank you graciously for the understanding and lovely comment ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow. I’m stunned. Brilliant work, my friend. On many levels.