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thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
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You are very welcome.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such a heartfelt write that pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for feeling me so deeply ❤️
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Writing helps, remembering happy thoughts are healthy, suppressing afraid of darkened pain is a negative. Be healthy Lady and never forget, just don’t live in the pain
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thank you dearest Me I sometimes feel I felled him it is an overwhelming feeling ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend. Your style feels like observational wisdom at its finest. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for reading it Damian. I appreciate that.
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
bi-trillets attempt. this one wasn’t easy for me…never do well when rhymin is involved.
endless night confession
breathe in the black smoke, love feels like a joke
the nights we wasted tasted strange
cheap liquor kiss, dirty exchangeyou were my worst itch, struck like a kill switch
old barroom lungs in borrowed light
we swore we’…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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A brilliant submittal, Syr Dru
Congratulations on another successfully excellent effort in displaying such admirable skill in the true essence and grasp of that which is conveyed in these earnestly shared teaching sessions.
Your poetic potential is second to none … this piece is spot-on in every sense of the phrase: meter, poetic voice, i…Read More
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I wonder if we are readin the same poem. I really expected this one to get marked up with a red pen on all the places I went wrong. I appreciate your input and the lessons you’re providin. I’ll agree with you on fixin the rhyme so I’ll add the s to pain. but you’re gonna have to pry my lowercase letters and lack of punctuation from my cold dead ha…Read More
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Ha-hahhhh!
That’s a given, M’Friend, but I’ll never give-up on ya. 🤓
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Read MoreI've already fadedAway againInto the memoryOf someone else.And I wasn'tEven here to beginWith.Always somewhereElse.Always alone.
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Short,sweet and very 👍
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Hey, ‘somewhere else’ is a special place with significant hidden meanings. There’s only ever gonna be one you, pal….are any of us ever REALLY here? Lately I’ve taken to keeping a major distance between lonely and lonesome, the latter being the preferred state.
You’ve posted some deep essays on philosophy, politics, religion, warfare and other stuff on FB that I think would be post-worthy here, and maybe a more concentrated, less scatterbrained audience.
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Uh, so on that other poetry website I post on it turns out I wrote like 749 poems across a couple years, but I wrote half of them in six months. Anyway, right now I’m just compiling and editing them and gonna try to publish them on Amazon or something if that’s easy. So I’m focussing on that. I got like 11 books worth to do. So I’m doing that. I have some essays on substack, but they get no attention. Eh, a lot of those things on facebook I post are AI outputs, but yeah, I might.
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hello dearest poet I feel you on this I don’t even know myself anymore I hear a voice in my head and it doesn’t sound like me I disppear often where I go I don’t know… I felt this ❤️
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This is so very touching, Brenda.