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May 2, 2025

Rhapsody of a St. Tropez Muse in Summer Dream logic unlockedIn radiant tresses of ruby fireBurning a path across my retinaLike Beaujolais wine on a summer day in St. TropezPoured across milky breastsWhen heaven cannot wait to disrobeThe pre-exhibition drapery...

6 Comments

Damian DeadLove
1 year, 4 months ago

Beautifully penned, John. Incredible imagery and nice wordplay. Appreciate you.

Damian
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you so much Damian. Your words here are deeply appreciated. My muse for this poem is in her fifties but ageless and timeless as a Goddess. Much gratitude.
  
  John
goldenmyst
1 year, 4 months ago

Glad you enjoyed and that my imagery was a lovely moment for you in the midst of the darkness and rain where you are. Thank you so much my friend. Greatly appreciated.

John
Visions_of_Insanity
1 year, 4 months ago

Outstanding write John. Your a great poet/storyteller
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thanks so much Visions. Much of the credit goes to my muse, a woman who has inspired me for many years. Her fifty-something beauty if ageless and timeless.
  
  John
goldenmyst
1 year, 3 months ago

Thanks so much Steven. Am honored by your words on my poem. Really heartening to read them. Very glad you find my poetry interesting. Really makes my day. Love that this poem in particular represented great Romanticism for you. That is what I was trying for. Glad you enjoyed.

John

Pinkdreams
1 year, 4 months ago

Thanks. Something tells me I have a chance to make more money in the next 5 – 10 years if I do something unique.
goldenmyst
1 year, 3 months ago

Pinkdreams, I love this poem! You spoke for all those stuck between the past and the future. Your courage is a wonder to behold. To set off after years maybe decades on this new adventure takes courage. I also enjoyed reading about the challenges you faced as a teacher. Love the tone you set for this poem. Enjoyed this much.

John
- Pinkdreams
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thanks, John. I have nine teaching days left, and it feels like too much. I’m going to give myself a month off, and then see what kind of new path I can forge.

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