Fucking great! Love this dark, disturbing write.

Thank you both for commenting..figured a gentlemans bar setting would be a perfect location for a little slasher sexy fun write..its a little graphic but a fun..at some point I may bring over my other butcher series/spin offs from DUP..and attach as a series..whenever there is time

Funny immediately I thought of the Diddy trial that is going on. This is a strong poem and makes you take pause. Nice. ;))

Mic Drop!

You nailed it.

I can read the morrison vibes in these verses. A well written Ode! “)

Just revisited the Olive Stone film The Doors last week. It still holds up. Great! This poem is awesome Damian. The Doors were revolutionary for the few short years they were around. Killer poem.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I really loved the ending dearest Damian yes powerful words and I love and still love Jim as I shake the cotton from my brain…great write and dedication ❤️

You capture Jim very well here. Excellent work.

There was just something about artist of that time that was just magical. Great tribute.

This had the cadence of a song to it. His influence drifting through you, perhaps? What a great ode to your inspiration, my friend

Still lighting our fire ….

BIG LIKE

Beautifully penned, P.G. The plot thickens, I like the shift in perspective, a different character a different point of view. Also reveals information to fill in the gaps between characters that only the reader is privy to, nicely done. Great flow on the information in the dialogue revealed by Mr. Knight. I think you’re a natural at this writing thing. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your romantic stories are a pleasure to read. Detailed, great build up of the characters and juicy bits and pieces, make your writes a joy. Great P.G xo

Line and sinker.. I’ll make sure to keep reeling you in, Adira 😉 xx
~P.G💋

Ooo she is in his sights. I love the devilish demeanor he has.