The Making of An Appetite
Watching us both in the tall mirror
making out like that
made me feel I was taking you twice ..
And I swear if you
had been a lychee or fig I would have
eaten you whole
right there and then with the sunrays
brazenly bouncing
off the sweat on your glistening back
and blinding anyone
who might just happen to be passing ..
Dear lord, how you
just gave this old man back his appetite ..








Passionately penned, Neville. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thanks but probably not half as much as I do you D .. N 😎👍
hi dearest Neville this is exciting and sexy ❤️
You just made an old fella’s day .. Bless you Crimsin .. 😎💛👍
Sunlit, hungry, and tender… a vivid spark of desire, beautifully distilled.