in the needful glare I don't measure up
gazing at starlit thoughts
they shimmer the souls of beauty
sacrifice the pride and put it aside
my luster has faded
my glory has stunted
redemption in a glance
if only you would look at me like that
pentrated want I desire more
mockingbirds gossip undressing me to my sorrow
it is with great care I cast my illusion
secrets revealed steals my glitter
lamenting in the spotlight of your disdain
my vain attempts are looked upon as weak
my burden to carry
my faith broken in you and self
a flower who bloom for a day and withered
no more hummingbirds to suckle
trading my self esteem for proclivities of shame
my thoughts mirrored back to me in this letter
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sorrow...
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Sad thoughts to fall.from lustful heights to mundane earth. Mere mortal again. Common clay.
Well captured my friend 🌼
yes sigh just a bad day thank you dearest Joe 💕
Bad days just make the good ones that come stand out all the better 🌼
thank you dearest Joe you’re right of course 💕
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Another great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously 💕
Brenda, you can take a sad day and make great poetry like this. This may be sad but it is art. I love how you express yourself even when you are down. Inspired and exquisite.
John
thank you dearest John yesterday was Mother’s day and I was at the park with my husband and I caught sight of him gazing at a younger more fit woman and I realized he would probably never look at me like that again it made me sad… I deeply appreciate the love you show me 💕
Always a pleasure to read your poems Brenda. You have a gift. xox
thank you graciously I appreciate you Keith 💕
Brenda, there will never be a voice as powerful & emotion-packed as yours. This has the feel of a stroll through a misty meadow viewed through tears. Beautiful ❤️
thank you graciously beautiful Willow for such a beautifully lovely comment 💕
Always and forever next level
Stonehenge poetry excavating the Soul of a writer
Aaahh
Much respect
Naaj
hello dearest Naajir good evening thank you graciously for such a beautiful comment ❤️