In this luscious field
I have been living
Flowers bloom
Colors consume
My senses yield
To lust’s misgiving
Roses of all color
Want me to bed
Do I have to pick
They all seem to prick
When I want to poller
Or am I being misled
Should I go for a Red
The color of my blood
A rose which just said
Come to me instead
I want you to flood
My throbbing bud
Or do I wait to garner
A sensual deceiving Lilly
The fairest of the white
An angle of delight
A passionate charmer
Or am I just being silly
Suddenly I’m pulled asunder
By a dark purple velvet
Could she be the one
To make my heart undone
As I hear the thunder
Of a whip and a painful threat
Then I drift toward a light
A sunflower that cries
As it screams and echos
I’m the brightest of the yellows
I’m the one you can not fight
My charms nor my cunning lies
Lost in this luscious field
How can I keep living
When I should be in a tomb
Or among flowers in a room
My senses I can not shield
So I surrender to lust so willing
It’s about time you participated in your own creation (site) again. Thumps up!
This didn’t disappoint either. The vivid details of the colors and their descriptive properties were on point.
Good to see you Sam!
Thank you Styxian… I was trying to deliberately stay back a little… I didn’t want people to think I was a show off or a narcissist… besides, I’m not as good as many of you here on this site…so I’ll just enjoy reading from a distance… anyway, thanks again for those beautiful words
Dude, show off! Really. This is what a site is for. You being the “leader” can lead with your own writes. that in itself is motivation. It’s your baby! It’s encouraging to see the efforts and results of those who truly care about what they write, as you do.
A captain is or is not the best at everything. But they are the leader that motivates. Yeah?
Dude.. those are among the best words anyone has ever said to me… I really really appreciate your amazing words … I have no words to express how I feel
Just continue doing what you do. That is plenty.
And I hope you feel rewarded, and the appreciation from those who have joined this site. Be proud!
I am bias, pick the red. This is a lovely write Sam.
I thought you might say that..
hello dearest Sam this is damned good my favorite has always been the sunflower something about it’s wild nature ❤️
charmer…
By design, nature must facilitate sex over and over. Don’t know if plants enjoy it, but us mammals are just wild about it!
from one mammal to another … I thank you for your comment