delicate rain how you touch me
tenderly and gentle
slowly opening my feelings to you
my senses come alive
and I wait for your caress in my secret places
bare of soul I open to you
silently pleading inside for more
until a deep drenching,
a downpour of lust
your beauty overcomes me
and I breathe heavily
sacred moment, you know when my vulnerability is nude
connected to your flesh and spirit
it is potent understanding, in the mists of arousal
where my mind and yours connect
as your being penetrates mine
and we become one for a moment
glowing in the warm summer rain
aglisten from our sex
deeply satisfied
we hold each other until it is light
This is quite sensual in its subtle way. I like the attachment to something as nourishing as rain is. It is natural, soothing and replenishing, like a good love should be. Or at the minimum, the times with a lover.
Well written, Crims. I like it a lot.
hello dearest Styxian I like to be sensual without being overt yes this would be my feelings for my love thank you graciously ❤️
soft and sexy. Reminiscent of making love on a lazy, rainy Sunday morning. I love it.
hello lovely poet thank you graciously I love your thoughts on this ❤️
Chère C.,
Amen!
And I wish for you that all your encounters may be as lovely and rewarding!
What a lovely poem. Love the artwork too. It reads like a prayer….
Warm regards, Gus
hello dearest Gus thank you for such a beautiful comment ❤️
Passionately penned, Brenda. What a beautiful write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
hello dearest Damian thank you it refreshed me too ❤️
I love the connection to nature in this piece. The analogy of rain, which promotes growth, is perfect for the sensuality in it. And the light coming at the end…beautiful, Brenda 🧡
hello beautiful Willow thank you nature is so part of me I’m happy you saw the connection with love ❤️
Exquisite .. in every respect .. my favourite genre & not a drop of ink out of place nor spilt unnecessarily .. Much respect .. Neville 😎🌻👍
thank you graciously dearest Neville such a beautiful comment making me smile ❤️
That’s most definitely what we call a win win 😎💛👍