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he knows the sound of my breath

as it catches

hovering over his words

like a hummingbird 

imbibing

on the intoxicating nectar

of his expression

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    1. For some reason I was compelled to read this from beginning to end, and then reverse from the end to the beginning. The choice of words in this hook the reader so well. Short yes, but sweet. And done with skill and vivid imagery.

    2. Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! This a magnificent little write here my friend. I mean I really dig the wordplay and imagery. Next level good. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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