Do you remember your first time?
An out of this world experience
Terror, Joy and Fantasy all wrapped into one…Mind Blowing!
These beasts tower over amusement parks
The curves and loops of these Steel & Wooden coasters
Brilliantly daring, dominating your curiosity
Anticipation as the train begins to lift
slowly creeping up the track
people, buildings & trees are shrinking
almost at the top
your heart is pumping really fast.
you can view the entire park
HERE WE GO….DOWN!!!
The air whistles past your face
your hands grip tightly to the handlebars
you begin to scream
your stomach has jumped out of your mouth
screaming continues…
shaking, thumping
hair blowing in the wind
eyes are tearing from the excitement & force
hands up in the air
Train is slowing down
coming back to the station
many are applauding
the experience was orgasmic
you exit the car with tingling hands,
a trembling body,
a glistening in your eyes
you want more,
your hooked
you wanted that experience to last forever
Let’s Ride!
I was expecting a final destination kinda of a poem. Hehe
A thrilling ride indeed!
HA! I was going to have some type of messed up, tragic ending but I decided to keep it clean. Thanks M.E
Lol. Cool! This one is great. Its okay to be sane from time to time. Hahaha
Powerfully penned, Keith. Appropriately titled by the way, most who love coasters are thrill seekers. I’m scared of heights myself, the only way I rode them was with a good buzz from liquid courage. Guess that’s not shocking. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
I see. Well we need to get you on a coaster without liquid courage and see if you’ll enjoy it..Thanks my friend.
Noooooooooo.
No roller coasters. No way. But I loved your poem.
C’mon. Let’s do it! What theme park do you live by?
Nope. NU UH. Not happening.