A tall mysterious man
With piercing radiant eyes
Was standing in the corner
Was it love at 1st sight
With her heart racing so fast
Her brain couldn’t warn her
She was struck hard
Smitten with love
Falling like never before
Planning a future
A life of adventure
She has never been more sure
She approached the man
With nervous confidence
And offered to buy him a drink
He smiled with a grin
And responded to her
“Sure whatever you think”
Laughing and smiling
They shared many stories
Into the deepening night
A love story in the making
The two silohettes fading
Under the bar rooms lights
Closing time approached
So she grabbed his hand
And romantically strolled outside
With the full moon shining
The shadows were playing
With no safe havens to hide
Hand in hand they strolled
Down the cobblestone street
As she brought him to her house
Excited for the night to continue
She invited him in
With no regrets or doubts
Passionately their lips met
As their eyes locked
A moment where time stood still
Her body tingling
From this sensation
And anticipation of being fulfilled
As he started kissing her neck
Goosebumps and butterflies
Held her captive in a hypnotic restraint
Slowly releasing his incisors
Her neck dripping blood
Her lifeless body now laying faint
She wanted a new start
An everlasting future
A relationship with adventure
Into the eternal world
Her new life begins
As her old one quickly surrenders








Powerfully penned, Mstrmnd. An excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Who doesn’t like a vampire story? Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thank you..I’m not thrilled with this write..but I wanted to try a different style..I debated about posting or deleting or rewriting..but rewriting never works out for me..so i posted anyway..hope all is well..I appreciate your response