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In my mind’s dark metamorphosis
hearing voices of haunting memory
buried in the marrow’s archeology
searching artifacts for Nazareth
dripping anesthesia of obsidian
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    1. WOW!
      I can’t believe I get first review for this splendid little mind twister.

      First-off, Adagio, I enjoy the skill it took to lay such smooth rhythm and spot-on line-breaks throughout. But, it’s how your metaphorical imagery moves the mind in so many directions, into such varied facets of perception calling out in deciphering your message … and, I’m gonna give it my best shot.

      L1 & L2 speak to me of how your thoughts and feelings have been altered by reminders of past tragedy and/or misfortune, and L3 shoved deeply back into your memory’s core (perhaps, for need of emotional and/or mental protection), L4 seeking salvation from it all, L5 something to numb the emotional pain and turn it into a shiny world of bright colors.

      Though, your title “Artifacts” drew me in, I think an apt title would be “Salvation”. Just my 2¢.
      I can l almost hear your laughter at my fumbling attempts to interpret the essence of this well-struck piece … but, I did my best for ya, My New friend.

      Drop by my place for a read (or, more) when chance allows:
      I’d like that very much! ⁓ Richard🖌

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