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Read MoreTwo worlds embrace The lambent imagination Where black shines brighter than the sun Collides with Pale reassuring reality Where white lamps swallow the stars
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Thanks for reading.
Feeling the waves.
Regards
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This felt so calm and balanced without having to use a lot of words to explain everything.
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Thanks for reading.
I am glad it felt calm.
Regards James
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Nice work as usual🙏
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Thanks for reading
Thanks for your words of strength.
Regards James
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I feel the sun and the moon with this. Very nice
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Thanks for reading.
The sun and moon are always with us.
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How can there be one without the other? The unity in diversity is incredible. Beautifully written…
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You better leave ’em alone He’s home grown he’s the cyclone He’s the moan groan Capone the clone The broken bone tone! July & August were absolutely bruuutal. Hope everyone here at Stars Rite is doing well. As-salamu alaykum 🙂 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BMyS0uojitA
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Read MoreAye! Let them come... those rude & angry points of misplaced palaver, let their tongue stones conjoin to appreciate teeth. (I only wish to love & die with the sea, to...
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Did not know sharks are older than Saturn’s rings. Figures, they are rulers of their domain. This is an interesting piece like the underwater theme. I feel that you are bringing attention to the destruction of the oceans. At least that is what I am getting from this,
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hello dearest poet I love the way you wove the rhythm with the words it sounded like an old pirate… sharks terrify me I have had nightmares of being lost at sea swimming among them but I guess I should fear the land sharks more great write 💕
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The flow of this…pardon the pun…is amazing. There’s calm & destruction found in the depths of the ocean. Definitely will be returning to read this again
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Enjoying freewill & preferring instruction, that is humility & love there. Whether it’s Him or him. This is strong, Brenda 🧡
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Read MoreInspired by: Sum 41 – Catching Firehttps://youtu.be/0HwXgNG-51A?si=rDqqBbwjaxgcddsLI feel like every day's a victory because I have these racing thoughts saying that everyone's against me I tell myself they're just delusions but it's hard to deny the world has gone to shit I just want to...
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That’s a great piece Nick👍
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Thanks. Glad you like it.
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This reminds me of “I Dreamed a Dream” from Les Miserable. We start out full of hope & sparkle & the world dulls our shine until there’s nothing left. Just bills to pay & the hope we go out on a good note rather than the usual shit. Totally feeling this one
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The world gets too big I suppose. It’s never enough to stay in your own happiness. The world is designed to take and take. But also the older we get we are hit with reality. Losing people, losing friendships and so on. I think the thing that hurts the most is knowing when those moments are gone they are gone. There will be no other moments like them
Thanks for the read, friend. Very much appreciate it.
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Brilliantly penned, Nick. Into the book it belongs! This write has layers my friend, excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much. Glad you liked my poem, friend.
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This is the second time I have read this, and I want to think about it. Depression is a strange beast. Not suicidal but not feeling the same. will drop dead doing something you hate. That struck a cord. I used to like the job I do, but too many worms came out of the apple, and now I work. This is my passion. To write and see others do what they love to do.
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For me the poem is rather my darkest depression. The world beats you down and some days I feel like I’m just going through the motions. As the poem says I’m not suicidal, but there is comfort in the idea that I choose the way rather than it being something, or somewhere I rather not be.
Thanks for the read, friend.
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hello dearest James a very beautifully succint poem I think we are on similar wavelengths today 💕