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Read MoreI asked her what his name was, then dropped the silver on the floor screaming itHis mother burst into a hysterical laugh, hoping that she was dreaming itI should had seen the resemblance, I should had been a better...
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This is a magnificent addition to the Beowulf legend. Truly fine storytelling. You really wrote this elegantly and an in grand mythical style. This had me riveted to the screen as I read. I love ancient myth and this is a fine example of a modern writer expanding on a mythical theme.
John
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Thank you sir, we also like myths and legends. We hope to continue with writes such as these
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The shock of discovering you killed your own. That is a horrible way to find out. I like how you wove this tale.
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Think of Oedipus and the final realization after you impregnate you own mom, hahaha, life is mythology and visa versa at times. Thanks Lady
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One of our favorite pieces and movies and to put it in a different era the kids may read this, thank you Lady
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This is an awesomely told tale my friend. You have the story tellers gift for taking an ancient story and breathing into it a fresh perspective that is so invigorating to read. You engage the reader with suspense and then that explosive ending. I too thought of Oedipus when that ending came. A worthy addition to the myth.
John
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We really appreciate your reading and comment, much respect
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Read MoreYellow Atrocity Screams In the depth of night,when all is silent,I can hear you scream.It’s a blood screamnot from a dream butthe reality of human atrocity.This sound is yellow,the shade often seen hiding in shadow,or imagined while listeningto a morose...
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This is so empowering. We need to stop this.
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Hi Curt. I know I left a review for this poem on WC, but the message is so important, I’m glad you shared it here too.
The imagery on this piece is haunting- The yellow scream is so vivid, almost synesthetic image that makes human atrocity feel terrifyingly alive.
The way sound, color, and darkness intertwine lingers long after reading.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
🌟 Hello and welcome to another edition of Stars Rite News!
I’m your host, Fia Naturie, and I have a few exciting updates to share with you today.
✨ Sign-Up Update
We recently had a little hiccup with the sign-up process, but the good news is—it’s all fixed! 🎉 You should now be receiving your password and sign-in details by email. If you d…Read More![]()
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Read More🌟 Hello and welcome to another edition of Stars Rite News!I’m your host, Fia Naturie, and I have a few exciting updates to share with you today.✨ Sign-Up UpdateWe recently had a little hiccup with the sign-up process, but...
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Informative info Fia. Thanks for all you do & the updates here.
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Thank you for saying that;))<3
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For such a new site, y’all are doing a kick-ass job of making it a solid place for writers.
Personally, anyone posting four pieces in a day is a lot. I’d like to see more faces posting in a day, than one face posting a lot in a day. Yaknow? It gets overcrowded quickly… But, eh, I’m just a user here. LOL -
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I don’t know if I may make a suggestion here, but ….
Is there a way to decrease the size of the header pics above a write, on the main page? If they were smaller, more of the recent authors/writes would show, which makes it easier to spot our favs, etc. As it is, it’s so labor intensive to keep hitting next, just to see a few writes as we scroll. Lesser size would add back more author visibilty on the main page.
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Hi, I will look into this. If you want to just see your friends work. Go to the top of the page and click on friends, and only their work will be shown.
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No, because we make new friends by seeing their writings! 🙂
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Thanks for the news update, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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You’re welcome, Damian
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Nope we have to keep others reading and enjoying, we want you entertained Lady. Thanks