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Read MoreI wrote this poem with no AI interference at all, nope none of that. The only thing AI did was help me get my poem onto this picture. That’s it. Thank you
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Hello there Fia 🙂 thanks for stopping and thank you for commenting. i’m glad you enjoyed this piece
Thank you❤️
Jackie
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Hello Honoria,what a treat to see you here.
Like I was telling Crim it took me all night to write this poem. I’m pretty happy with the outcome. Thanks for looking, sweetheart.
Miss you
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Hello Damian.
Always a pleasure to see you on my page. I appreciate you too thank you my friend.
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Hi there vision, thank you. It means a lot and thank you for reading it and commenting. Appreciate you.
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Thank you very much Abby appreciate you.
Jackie xx
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
Diversity
Being a city boy
with Native roots,
I have always loved the feel
of cool, dew-laden grass
licking my toes;
the scent of pine needles
on the forest floor;
the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts
inside my heart,
I begin to see the balance of life.
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Very good…. I love this part the way a blue butterfly
will sometimes land
on your outstretched hand.
As I wrap all these thoughts… A beautiful metaphor.. like if a butterfly can sense our thoughts . I do feel they sense those things too. Nice work… Keep it up-
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Thanks Navina, I am glad you found this poem enjoyable. It means a lot and I appreciate your comment
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Of course .. poetry is always good to read. My mind is always thinking so I write it down haha.
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Read MoreShe moves around with cautionNever knowing when "they" may appearParanoia has been setting inShe knows there realEveryone is telling her there notShe'll witness "them" from the corner of her left eye"They" look like little children whisperingAt times they'll look...
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Okay you know I am a scardy cat but this is good.
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Appreciate it Fia. Thank You!!
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Thanks for reading PAR.
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Read MoreGreetings (Fill in the persons name here)!Now that I have your attentionHere's what I'm going to do to youI'm gonna slam my left fist into your rib cageYou lift your arms to give me easier access to your ribs...
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There are beathing and there is decimation. Damn..
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Bring on the decimation! Thanks Fia.
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Miss Indie and
Backdeckbenny (Peter) are now friends
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The Queen is a dark bad ass. Like the lay out and the rhyme scheme.