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Well, they will see only what they want. If you are not part of the equation, then you must be removed. this is something that is insightful and I appreciate that you did not lead the writer on what you meant it to be.
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Brandon, this one hit’s hard in all the right ways. The questions linger, and the honesty carries. Worth a second read, as always with your work.
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Read MoreDid you ever see your loneliness Or close down and take the painAfter every piece of hope was goneDid you give yourself the blameDid you start the fireOr just supply the sparkWas it hard to run In the dark? Did...
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. That’s an amazing write for anyone, makes it that much more impressive at 16 years old my friend. I still I have my first notebook as well, have never posted them though. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian,
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You wrote this at 16? What a deep thought. What a wonderful beginning. Welcome to Stars Rite Brandon;)
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Thank you! You made me smile this morning.
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There’s a raw, searching honesty in this. you can feel the questions shaping the voice that would come later. The repetition of the dark works like a pulse, steady and human. A strong beginning, and you can already see the spark you kept.
P.S. I’m so glad you broke out that notebook my friend.
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I am very happy I did. 🙂
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Read MoreYou touch me, like a man who has already studied the fault lines under my skin. Slow, unhurried, so certain. I will soften for you, the moment you decide to claim that space. You move with the patience of someone who understands: hunger does not need to be rushed, only revealed. Each...
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I like how your poem methodically draws the reader in. Perhaps time management is what separates the men from the boys. There is a difference between a kiss and a lip service. Desire is a language…very uniquely true.
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Thank you, Angel. I’m glad the pacing spoke to you. Intention matters… It’s its own kind of language.
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Passionately penned, CG. Excellent write with many layers my friend. This one is more than meets the eye. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Your eye for the layers means a lot to me. Grateful for you.
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subtle and vulnerable – I love your rhythm, Curly. Harriet -Jacqui xx
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Thank you, Harriet‑Jacqui. Your kindness sits softly with me.
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Ah, that’s such a lovely way of putting it! Thank YOU!
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Thank you, Peter… that’s really kind.
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Thank you, Atticus… I’m really glad it spoke to you.
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write that really packs a hell of a punch my friend. This world is frustrating indeed. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian