This is hot as a piece of iron straight out of the forge. You wrote with with the erotic power of a poet who knows exactly what she is doing. This is smoking hot.

John

Nice sensual write Fia…

Powerful and hot. Great write.

hello lovely poetess thank you for reading me ❤️

Crimsin!! Great to see you here. You know how I love your poetry. All of it shines! Great to see you here.

Starting where you left off
Amen
BIG LIKE

Great job… so glad to know I can still read your work…

thank you graciously for the lovely comment I’m glad to see you here ❤️

Magnificent, my friend. A darkly lit poem to remember. You write this theme like none other.

John

Darkness, secrets and desires – now that’s what I call a splendid trio in your poetry Brenda! Keep the exquisite poetry coming!