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Read MoreIt's grey today outsideIt matches my somber moodWith feelings of melancholy, I feel weighed downYou would think the rain would signify cleansing to meAnd the raindrops by themselves wouldIt's the grey depression I can't takeweeks that drag on under...
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Thanks for the read and listen. Now my horrible voice will scar the lives of many. I’m glad you loved the lyrics, this was always intended to be a song. Good old GarageBand way back in 2009. Appreciate you, Fia.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and listening, as well as your kind words, Adira. That’s what I was afraid of that people would want more, I’m kidding. lol. I was just trying to remember the melody, I knew my voice isn’t great. But I still now the melody, so it all worked out in the end. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sorry it didn’t play. It’s an acoustic song, maybe Bob Dylan/Neil Young, kinda style. I’m glad you enjoyed the lyrics my friend. Means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I couldn’t get the audio to play but I really like the lyrics. As usual, you don’t skate across the surface. You take us deeper than many do. My daughter keeps telling me songs are just poetry with a tune. Not sure where that drops me…I always hear my poetry with a tune. Nicely done, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Sorry you couldn’t hear it, Fia was able to and so was Adira. It plays for me, this is why I hate technology. lol. Anyways I’ll try to get it resolved, I wanted you to hear it as well. She’s pretty spot on, lyricist obviously make more money than most poets. I also think that’s why poets or writers are involved in music. They more likely to be heard. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sorry it didn’t play. I’m looking into it. I couldn’t get it to play on QuickTime when I was messing with it, but it played over here. I’m glad you love the lyrics, I wanted you to hear it to. Appreciate you, Duende.
Damian
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Hello Damian. The lyrics are wonderful. I couldn’t get the audio to play. Nevertheless, I’m sure your voice kicked ass. Nice work here.
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Damn, I may send it to you then. So glad you liked the lyrics, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreIn search of a twin flame When the heart wants more Four chambers to hold and secure Not obvious to those Whose hearts are closed To the possibility That there could be more for you and me Yeah, some will consider it to be greedy I consider...
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Keep doodling more of those…
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Sam.😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. I agree with, Sam. Also love your musings my friend. Great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I will keep musing;))
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Wonderful ink. Love the doodle to go along with the poem.
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Thank you, Nick. I appreciate that.
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Read MoreSome days I feel like a drowning woman But everyone thinks I'm waving hello While I choke on the way This darkness pulls me under Sadness dwells with nothing to remedyNo company do I keepalone in my melancholy having a personality...
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Great collaboration. You always shine so bright in all of them. Great ink
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thank you graciously dearest Nick from us both 💕
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Lovely, poignant and resonant for me.💋
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hello dearest Peter thank you graciously from us both 💕
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I love the lyrics. Damian, cool piece