That’s one helluva wicked woman you just poemed Damian .. way to go my friend .. if you would kindly send me her coordinates I will stop by and convey my regards .. Neville

I love this, Damian. It reminds me of “Witchy Woman” by the Eagles. 🌾🕊️

I wish I could hear the music behind it. Perhaps someday we’ll get a glimpse of your energy and fire within your lyrics. Good one, Damian.

I sincerely hope this one makes the album cut! I so badly wanna hear it! It moves like a snake, undulates down the page. Perfect for the lyrics, my friend

This is fire, friend. Everyone loves a wicked woman.

Powerful work.

I can hear this playing in some club… maybe even a strip club!? LOL
It has a great beat to the lines. It’s also very entertaining! Awesome job Damian.

Killer piece dude. You’re a talent my friend.

What depravity does the rip tide take you to..

This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
😜

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡

Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.

John

OMG…. This is one of your very very best

Absolutely love the flow of this piece! It is reminiscent of the legends of old. Stellar write, my friend.

Clay

Nicely done Fia…

Powerful excursion…

<#3 Cipher

Lyrical and thoughtful. It has, for me, a distinctive Autumnal feel to it.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Incredible flow, it has a lyrical vibe. Excellent write, cuz. This is next level great. Appreciate you.

Damian

A nice one Fia. Sentiments and feelings should be created with positive thoughts in mind.

This feels a bit like an invocation, a psalm. Almost spiritual in its expression. Just…wow

This has a very Poe vibe. Has layers and takes a bit of thought.

Wonderful ink.

Exquisitely poemed my friend .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍

Sounds like a bit more than ‘romantic’…😜

Oh! This is very good, Brenda.

I drift, happily, into the dripping honey spaces unafraid of the liquids,preexisting and resulting.
Thanks for the respite. ❣💞💦💞

hello dearest HJ I truly appreciate the lovely comment thank you 💕

Powerful. You paint this scene well.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such amazing imagery my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hauntingly gorgeous. Your emotions ripen through the act and feeling of love into a rose blossoming of desire and passion. I enjoyed this thoroughly. You have the gift of putting passion into a poem of great resonance and deeply seductive all entwined. This is great poetry. And I loved reading this tonight.

John