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Read MoreWaiting for you is like waiting to shake the priest’s hand and thank him for a beautiful funeral In stone seamed pulpit am I the only culprit who seeks redemption from s(k)in in Dead Sea Scrolls of other skin? Ventriloquist placed your words in my mouth and...
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you’re too kind. thank you.
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There can be so many things that terrorize us. The worst is regrets of the past that stay with us. That haunt us in our sleep or just won’t let us sleep.
Getting rid of those demons can be a long, agonizing and scary process.
Really sharp personification here.
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hello dearest Jacob thank you graciously for feeling me on this I love your thoughts❤
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreOn the edge of your waking dreams let me trace the sun rise upon your skin this could be painting-by-numbers but my only palette are tongue and fingers I could lie here through hibernation turning the dit.com sitcom to fade, your head resting on my...
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Very clever wordage here. This is sensual and wry in its humor.
Love the “lisp broken words”—-
j.
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Thank you J. I obviously wasn’t wearing my spectacles last night – it’s meant to be ‘dot.com’ not ‘dit.com’. mixing my vowels!
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You’ve taken painting by numbers to a most sensual high. I don’t know that any man has ever succumbed to “negligee geography”, but hey, there’s a first time for everything. And what a way to go!
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Read Moredwells in silence fortitudefor a love between twoone is distant and closed off from viewthe other smitten intimately confidinga friendship of the eternalfate to cast each at oddsthe pendulum swings there is mistrusta mistress of the night, a lady...
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Brilliance Brenda. You’re a magnificent poet my friend. Spellbound!!! xoxo
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hello dearest Keith good afternoon thank you graciously I am enjoying my afternoon after receiving a house of thosand corpses book by Rob Zombie❤
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Very cool. I heard about this book. Rock on Brenda!!! xo
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Wistufl, whimsical and a conflict of emotions battling within this stunning piece. The imagery is on full throttle.
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hello dearest Jacob thank you graciously for the thoughts on this piece it is often difficult for witches to remain friends❤
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Sort of like a dissention among the ranks vibe. This does have a witchy, almost horror scented feel to it. Nice!
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hello dearest Tim thank you graciously I love your interpretation I miss this witchy friend of mine but we are trouble together❤
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Don’t know where my fingers went, Crimsin. I meant “wistful”—getting jumbled in my old age.
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that’s okay I understand I get to typing too fast lol❤
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Read MoreStrum me a lullabyto keep my mind at easeHold each note as it criestill I begin to sleepEach note is a storypressed and released in timeHold each fret in its gloryMove it slightly up or down. DevinePlay it soft...
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A touching tribute to music and musician. This may be the best compliment that a guitar player could ever expect. A feeling of peace and satisfaction is elicited in me.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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When I’m practicing guitar a little later, I’ll play you a few bars. 😉
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Aww thank you;))
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In G I’m thinking. 😉
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Maybe on a minor key?
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Oh my… Choices. lol
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Excellent poem, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim
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Now that was a song all on its own!
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Thank you, Willow ;)) <3
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Oh, my–are you talking to me? I’m being silly, of course. I’ve been playing guitar for a long time, so these words have special meaning. I love the image of this damsel being moved by the sound of the strings. Who knows what will happen at intermission?
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Oh Sam… Intermission is where the stories are created. Thank you
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This flows like a melody. Great piece Fia.
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Thank you so much ;))
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Very nicely poemed Ma’am .. Neville
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I always loved this one, cuz. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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“The rigor mortis of planes on runways.”
Quite creative imagery there and throughout.
The first stanza could even stand as a poem by itself.
“Ventriloquist placed your words in my mouth”
I have none of my own any more as I am so taken by you.
Love the concepts developed here.
Excellent work.
j.