-
Fia Naturie wrote a new post
10 Comments-
-
Powerfully penned, Fia. My subconscious likes to play tricks on me. lol. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
-
‘Shuddered breaths’, what a sensual way to describe that moment when time stands still and hearts flutter. And the whole world awaits your touch. Nicely penned, Fia.
-Curt
-
Beeeautifully laid poetry, Dear Poetess 🍷
But, what else would we expect from the gal with a star-blessed pen✨While so many of us will easily relate to your sentiments in comparing the greatest love of our lives with every one thereafter, only a rare few can express its essence as eloquently skilled as you have here … tugs my mind and heart back to wondrous yearnings I still dream of and never got over, and most likely never will.
I actually felt “shuddered breaths” … amazing, Fia!
Thank you for sharing You! ⁓ Rascal🖌 -
This short poem read so wistfully. I could feel it all as the word unfolded so beautifully with that disquietingly powerful ending. A great reflective poem.
John
-
-
Fia Naturie wrote a new post
7 Comments-
-
Hi Fia, thanks for the update. I am very new here, but I think you and your team are doing a great job with this poetry site. It is truly a pleasure to be here.
Curt
-
-
-
Fia Naturie wrote a new post
-
Crimsin wrote a new post
3 Comments -
Crimsin wrote a new post
2 Comments - Load More Posts
My Friends
Adelphina
@adelphina
Miss Indie
@miss-indie
Rosie C
@rosie415
Al Ashcott
@al-ashcott
D. Ignatov
@ignatov
Groups
National Poetry Month
Public Group
Unsung Underground
Private Group
My Recent Posts

If Time Listened To Me
- April 30, 2026

A Second Draft of Us
- April 29, 2026



Just when we think we forgot a feeling, dreams give us a nudge
Thank god for dreams.
Nice to see you posting:)