You write this story with such clarity and weave it into an engaging scene that reaches out and rivets my attention. Great poem.

John

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You have expressed a real life tale with honesty and clarity.
I have been there. Got locked up for being drunk in public myself once.
I think I said to a police officer “Your a C…U…N…T. I didn’t say it i just spelt it out.
He didn’t understand. When he realised what I was saying I was thrown in the van.
I they took my clothes and gave me some grey prison scrubs. When I sobered up I started singing prison songs.
“He’s in the jailhouse now.” and Locked up by Akon. Some counties in England are stricker on booze than others. I have been out of my mind all over England, but Yorkshire was the place they locked me up. Don’t do it in Yorkshire.

Thanks for sharing this poem. I am glad to know I am not the only one.

regards
James

This sounds like such a Midwest thing. Great telling of the night!

Thank you so much.

hello dearest Thomas who is to say what wisdom is maybe knowing it is futile is true wisdom…not all of us play games and if we do we may not realize it until later that might be wisdom a reckoning with behaviors… great write 💕

Cleverly penned, Thomas. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks, my friend.

Thank you.

“traces of humanity remain”. Basically how I feel about the world as a whole. Great ink.

Thank you. I appreciate it.

An insightful write! Unfortunately the quill of the greats are considered rare goods nowadays.

Good job, Thomas!

Cleverly penned, Thomas. Insightful and precise write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very deep and creative. Wonderful ink.

Thanks

Be the light! A perfect line that sums all the teachings in the world. Well done, Thomas! “)

hello dearest Thomas I will do my best even if it is black shine great write 💕

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Sound advice my friend, amazing write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much.