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Stellar writing…
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I’m glad you like it, Drieks! Your comments are awesome! Thanks for reading.
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You make me smile!
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Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.
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Thanks, Thomas! Glad you liked it.
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Brilliantly penned, DK. You’ve got mad skills my friend, with the pen of course. Clarification is important sometimes. lol. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m so glad you think my skills are ‘mad’, Damian. No clarification necessary! Thanks for reading and following me!
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Mmmm…the gift and the curse maybe?
This vibe was very imaginative!!
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Glad you think so, Naaj – definitely a curse. I appreciate you reading!
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Oh shit…
Thanks for telling me.
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Idk how this poem slipped out of my radar, but I am glad to catch up and “hunt” few of your poems.
They say a good writing is a writing which makes you feel the want to fuck, destroy and create something all at once. I guess I am having that feeling again!
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I’ve never heard that before, but I’m glad to bring you there!
I like the concept of being ‘hunted’ because it metaphorically represents what happens all the time in reality. The tricky part, from a girl’s perspective, is getting the right person to hunt you and avoiding the wrong ‘predator’.Thanks for reading!
xoxo
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Read MoreThe door slammed behind me, indicating that the chief must have decided I was in the wrong and her incompetent rookie was in the right.“What the hell were you doing coming in the back way? You are no longer...
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Your a great storyteller Fia. Nice work!!
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Thank you, I appreciate you reading my story;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Your writing shines. Excellent as always!
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Thank you, Keith;))
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Woow ❣️❤️🔥
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Are we speechless? 😉
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~P.G💋
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I mean, it’s a good question right?! Glad you enjoyed, thank you.
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HJ it is always such a pleasure having you in my comment section. So glad you got a good feel 😉 xx
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Mission accomplished! ❤️
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Passionately penned, P.G. Might I add while it did got hot in here, that this is also a very clever write my friend. Love breaking the 4th wall much? lol. That was really cool actually giving the reader a role inside the fantasy, by the way it occurs to me if you didn’t intend it that way and were somehow unaware, that I might have just opened Pandora’s box. I’m going with you intended it that way. Fantastic spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Haha if I told you, dearest Damian, it wouldn’t be my best keep secret anymore would it? 😉 Good eye though my friend. Your observation is refreshing!! xx
~P.G💋
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Erotica with humor woven into it hehe 😜 I like that! Bravo!
Daniel
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Daniel, thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed. xx
~P.G💋
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I am not late to this party just late in commenting. lol
Woman! Omg fire is not the word, more like a sticky inferno of sexual domination. Love it. -
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Playing with fire burns,
As these hot lines playing with us.Shh..I’ve got the keys. But not now.
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Well played out erotic scene. Loved how the anticipation bult as the story unfolded. And loved the playful reactions you had as he orchestrated your pleasure.
John
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