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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Thank you
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Read MoreShe steps from the showera vision of warmth and water and light. Steam still clinging to her skin,drops tracing paths down her shoulders,the air itself seems to hush for her.That towel, drawn so tight to guard her beauty.Shapes that...
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They are usually the reason we ever learned what longing means.. and the reason we write about it… beautiful
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Thank you p, Sam. Grateful for your comments.
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This is so excellent. I’m really glad I read it, thanks for posting.
This particular stanza didn’t read smooth. If I may suggest…
That towel, is drawn tight
to guard her beauty.
His hands still remember
the soft curve shapes of her lovely breasts,
the gentle hollow where shadows meet.Great writing.
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Thanks for reading, and for your thoughtful analysis,Tim. I appreciate your constructive criticism very much.
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My pleasure. 🙂 Awesome poem.
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![Profile picture of Neville]()
Incredible ink .. and so perfectly spilled ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
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Thanks, Nev!
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Thank you for the good news Fia 🙏🏻
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Sorry about the issue.
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A website is ever evolving so, no problem Fia! 💕
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beautiful thank you ❤️
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Welcome and I do apologize
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it’s fine I’m sure keeping this site running is tedious and as much a miss DU i’m getting the flow of this
Star ❤️
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Thanks, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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How cool is that .. I Know for a fact that besides me, there will be many others who are grateful for this update and accompanying good news .. Neville 😎👍
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Thanks Neville;))
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Read MoreDue to a new plug-in for Audio Video . The audio to the poems has been removed, but the poem is still on the site. Do not remove the poem. Edit the poem and re-upload the audio. If you are...
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Thank you for the update Fia. I was wondering what had happened.
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Read MoreWhen you announce that you're coming to dinner, the hosts should be prepared. Seeing that his death is the center attraction of the meal, I assumed that I will not be greeted appropriately. I went home to change into something...
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The poor guy. lol He should have known better. When vamps smell food they go for it. 🙂
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Right. Thank you, Tim;))
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling as always my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Magnificent storytelling Fia. Succulent!!
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Thank you, vision. I am gonna try gore for the ending
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Blade vibes.
I was emersed from the start.
regards
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That is such a compliment. I love Blade
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More