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Read MoreShe came up behind me as I was taking off my makeup, and wrapped her arms around my waist. “Vienes a la cama, Amor?” Are you coming to bed, love? I smiled and closed my eyes. She didn’t initiate often, but fuck. Just...
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Thanks Peter, it’s the fucking best.
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent storytelling per usual really love the layers in your writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. It’s so much harder for me to write this narrative voice, and I appreciate that you foind nuance.
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Stinking, reeking, sweating womanly sex – so hot my knees are trembling!
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Mine were too. WLW smells like gardenias and jasmine… fucking glorious shit.
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Gardenias and Jasmine! Aren’t you the lucky one, girl?! Cherish the moment! Harriet-Jacqui Furl writing as HJ Furl on Amazon.
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Why, why did this have to end? lol I know life continues but this is hot.
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I mean, we had to work. 🙂
When it was one of THOSE nights with the one who got away, it feels like it never ends… god above… it feels like eternity in every steaming breath. Smooth skin and soft breasts and held-breath cries… yeah. It feels forever.
Thanks for dropping in Fia and supporting me. I don’t know what I’m doing right now, but I’m appreciative to have space to stretch my fingers and figure it out.
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You are welcome to do that here. Betty
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What the hell?! You literally described Del. And in another subliminal way that I noticed, because I’m kinda like rain man sometimes. LOL. So what if I’m quirky!
BTW, if I was a female, I’d be lesbian. I get it.
Your erotica is intense and not pornish. That is because you are a skilled writer!
I’m still waiting for more of your heady writes. But I know you’re on a purge. So have at it. Thankfully you’re good at all subject matter.-
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Bro, when I said I’d fucking take your woman from you if you were an asshole? I MEANT it. I’d totally steal your woman from you. (She’s hot!)
Thanks. The intimacy is so, so different, and structuring it in a way that was less textbook and more opera is still challenging. I might write for my gay half for a while. (My straight half has had the shit kicked out of it for some years.)
I don’t know what’s next as Betty. I don’t know if she has much left in the way of heady writing. We shall see.
Love you bro. I mean, really. (Be good to your girl or else!)
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She is incredible. So I’m not an asshole just for her! LOL.
“Betty” needs to celebrate being Betty across a few topics, etc. You have a very human way with words that everyone can relate to, and wish that they themselves had the inner voice to get down in words. So embrace it all. You are very well rounded.
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Really love the go between you and Styxian, great commenting. The piece can’t be denied for it’s steaminess, it’s like watching a flick, tight
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Styx is seriously my brother-from-another-mother. Glad you dug it my friend. Really glad.
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Read MoreYvonneIf you had told me, I would be in the arms of this man. This particular man, who made it a point of not acknowledging my existence. I will call you an absolute liar.You see, I'm not the typical...
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Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling per usual my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Chère F.,
Lovely to see you have posted again.And, while my tongue seems to have a will of its own, who needs Valentine if we can have this?
Also poem-wise, I’m hungry for more!
Warm regards, Gus-
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Oh Gus it is coming. Thank you
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This is a very well told story, dear Fía. It awakens the curiosity of your readers and keep it up. I can hardly wait to read the sequel!
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Thank you, Elke appreciate that.
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Hahaha, tis is so real and we’re thinking you incorporated some truth in this, tight one Lady
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Haha no just my imagination. Thank you ME
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Kind of story I come back from sun basking in Gran Canaria for! Superb writing, Fia, and much enjoyed.
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Thank you for that H.J;))
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Heart-warming and affectionate piece.
Emotionally unraveling throughout.
I’m glad it had a sweet, happy ending.
I had a feeling that disaster might strike, but instead all safe and well. x
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Thank you Rosie, Maybe I will write something that has disaster in it. 😉
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Read MoreThe Test to Speech is not going to show up on you work unless you click the option. If it has not been removed from your work please reach out to me and I will remove it. If you do...
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Stay true to yourself, my friend.
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Thank you, Atticus
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tell her… she doesn’t believe me
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I believe you;))
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Fia, never a need to apologize for being honest. You have a huge heart my friend and I know how much you want all of us to thrive and be comfortable in our home while continuing to build ourselves a prosperous community. Thanks for all that you do! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Thank you for all you are doing. The other sites are boring and soulless. This site has seen considerable growth, and I appreciate our diverse group of poets and writers having a place to congregate.
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Thank you, Benjamin, I appreciate you saying that.
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The site is BEAUTIFUL and fun, Fia. Also, you were the first one to reach out to me. I appreciate the great effort you do, because talking to the site members and working on this site is a HUGE job. Thank you for that. It surprises me that someone has been nasty to you, but just so you know – and I believe I speak for many – there are more of us who support you 🙂
Al
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Thank you for that Al. I appreciate it.😊
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Based on this artiusing piece, I think in my next life I’d like to be a woman.
Great write.
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