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Read MoreI love to live on the very brinkpen my life in a darkened inklet these words truly then liewith every excuse and alibiBathe in sweet, sticky sinnever afraid to again beginto let myself now spillin a dark diabolical thrillDocumenting...
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Read MoreResting restlessly within the dark of its sheath,my poetic knife feels expressionless.When so, it wants to be drawnand plundered into the white of the page.Then it wants to cut through the emptinessand carve out beautiful metaphors.The blade will glint...
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Sinister. The metaphors cut like a sharp ass knife. Nice work!
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Haha like your apt feedback! Hahaha
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Read MoreJust speak to meand you’ll gaze into thewilderness behind my eyes.This wilderness,lush in dreams,barren realities!As I open the gate for you,I sit and listen white-knuckledto the voices within my mind.The further you trek in my mind,the closer to summery...
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Great detail. The suspense and direction this poem goes is alluring. Nice work!
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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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Delicate and exquisite as calligraphy inked on skin. You write this so well, my friend.
John