Tim – Stars Rite

Fia Naturie
2 months, 2 weeks ago

It is a bit musical. I wish for a better day, each and every day. That deer lost in headlights is so true
- Damian DeadLove
  2 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. A lot of us do wish for better days, that’s for sure. It has a musical feel is on point, it pretty much demanded to be that way, I just followed along for the ride. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
Property Poet
2 months, 2 weeks ago

I agree.

Thank you for putting it into words so eloquently.
- Damian DeadLove
  2 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Neville
2 months, 2 weeks ago

Got my foot tapping away from the off to the end and back again .. Nice one too sir . Neville
- Damian DeadLove
  2 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does have a bit of a rhythm. Thank you for your continued support kind sir. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Brandon Houser
  2 months, 1 week ago
  
  I like how this feels angry and tenderly thought at the same time. I like that hopefulness in the dark
  - Damian DeadLove
    2 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brandon. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
goldenmyst
2 months, 1 week ago

Damian the fire in the eyes of those zealous followers of the pied piper elevated to guru status is painted in your poem with fire and smoke. Truly a smoking great poem that is as strong emotionally as it is rhythmically. You have real talent my friend.

John
- Damian DeadLove
  2 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really loved the way you described the write in your eyes my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Wally
1 week, 1 day ago

I don’t think I’ve seen subterfuge used in poetry before and you made it fit and feel perfect.
I think many of us are feeling the same way, especially with the way the world is going.
Excellent write sir.
- Damian DeadLove
  6 days, 18 hours ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like using odd words or hardly used words from time to time. When I can make them fit of course. lol. The world is very fragile at the moment. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

Fia Naturie
2 months, 2 weeks ago

This is an interesting conversation that a mother and son have over dinner. It is a sweet dynamic that he still confides in her about what he is doing in his life and the way she talks to him gives you how much she cares about him.
- goldenmyst
  2 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Much gratitude my friend. Yes the mother son conversations is indeed a sweet dynamic that leads to him sharing with her. Than you so much my friend. Deeply appreciated.
  
  John

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