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May 18, 2025

The sun struggles to rise The water is flat The stillness of the air Casting blindly Instinctively know where it lands Let it sink into the depths Invade a secret Slow movement The soft under tow pulls A grip tightens Give and take increases Angle diverges One last powerful pull Culminating into...

16 Comments

Backdeckbenny (Peter)
1 year, 4 months ago

Your fishing is different from mine.😉
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  You sure you went to the right place? ☺️
Sam Nash
1 year, 4 months ago

I never knew fishing could be so much fun…
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Yes it is😁
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 4 months ago

Brilliantly penned, Fia. This was a clever and sexy write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, Damian 😊
Fia Naturie
1 year, 4 months ago

Yes the fish called the big O. Lol
Thanks Keith
M.E
1 year, 4 months ago

Did you use bait? Hahaha
A beautifully written piece! “)
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I did use bait (wink)
Daniel Long
1 year, 4 months ago

Sounds very therapeutic 😌 hehe
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  It is…I just need to hold that rod tight;))
  - Daniel Long
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Damn! Fia, you caught me off guard with that hahahaha 😆 😂
NAAJIR
1 year, 4 months ago

All I could do was smile at the cleverness of this allegorical vibe.
One of my favorite poetic alleys.
Sexy, sexy

Naaj
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I made you smile? Great.
  Thank you, Naaj
  🫠
Wally
1 year, 4 months ago

Oh that smile says a lot at the end.
Well done Fia.
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you,Wally;))

Crimsin
1 year, 4 months ago

hello dearest Benny this is beautiful yesterday my daughter and I were buying potted flowers and she held up another and said what about this friend when we made our choice she buckled it up in the back seat and smiled at me… for her I would have taken them all home ❤️
Sam Nash
1 year, 4 months ago

The next tree I see I’m going to hug… this was perfect Peter…
Backdeckbenny (Peter)
1 year, 4 months ago

Thank you all for your comments….trees are our family…right.