Phenomenally penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Enjoy the grass;))

Don’t forget to smell the flowers!!

Ground yourself, let nature speak to you and come back with a free mind and lots of inspirations!
All the best, Tim, hope to see you soon! 🌳

Have a good break Tim. Come back refreshed.

Chris

Take care, Tim. Recharge the batteries my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Love the depth and layers in this write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Tim this is very dark great write ❤️

Wow! The whole write is moving but the line about having her wings plucked and her breath made off with, great metaphors for death. You have a great talent mister!

That’s very good Tim….very good

Thanks very much, Peter.

Beautifully penned, Tim. Sensational imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hi dearest Tim I loved the imagery ❤️

I like how the poem captures the restless, whimsical dance of leaves…it’s vivid and alive. I feel a shiver reading it, both from its beauty and the fluttering imagery– of moths (which terrifies me! Lol ), yet it’s utterly stunning. The gentle, swirling cadence and the soft rhymes make the poem feel as airy and unpredictable as the leaves themselves, perfectly echoing their flight.

The dance of the leaves as they pirouette to the ground is such a welcomed sight to see. Beautiful capture of such a wonder of nature. Good to see you here, Tim!