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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Read More“Love like a fart can bring forth an emotion that makes you mad But if presented in the right situation can make you laugh, “While fucking you can say ‘I love you’ and afterwards...
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This sounds like the person is torn up about being cheated on that they are lashing out at everyone. Its best to keep them away then to have them close so they do not hurt you. That’s what I see.
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Sometimes being isolated in situations like this is the best.
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So many crazy lines butas with pieces like these you always include some truth. Tight
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Thank you. I try to present that hard truth so hopefully someone can learn and understand.
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Read MoreI. I lent wings to the boy-angel, or something like wings and he tried to fly, or something close to it, or maybe fly later, but the sky kept freezing, freezing, and he kept saying “I’m going up, going down, resending,” like a clause...
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You know this is quasi-brilliant. It’s like an updated bible of sorts. Not so much religious as it is of the human conditioning of limitations. Truly an outstanding piece of writing.
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I’ve being trying my best lately, thank you for the read and comments.
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Cleverly penned, PAR. This piece is brilliantly written my friend. Truly amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brother, thank you for the read and comments.
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This piece has become liturgically and surgically well-constructed.
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PAR you are a great writer. Always pushing the envelope with your poetry. Nice work.
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You’re the best, Keith!
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I loved how quirky this is. I kept wondering where the next passage would go.
And it does have a comic newborn superhero feel to it with all the attempts at flying.
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Thank you a lot, poets know all the attempts at flying.
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Read MoreWhispers she, the night sky,Climb and higher, we go fire,and matter until the plasmic sway appears as a blood moon in union, with lifestars shine in my eyes for you first a flicker then a flamemy hedonistic Goddess of Earth...
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Dear B and S_D,
You capture and blend the essence and passion of women, earth and Mother Earth in this sizzling write. I enjoyed the ebb and flow of this work and how the process of collaborating yields great story telling. Congratulations to you both. H 🌷
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hello beautiful Honoria from us both that is the tone she embodies… so it felt really natural to write this with her… thank you graciously from us both ❤️
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great stuff, you two. Done just right. Plenty of descriptive moments to build the character into an active existence.
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hello dearest Styxian thank you graciously from us both it’s how I view her ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda & Sky. Excellent collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously from both of us ❤️
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Read MoreIf God can act and does not,that is a choice.If God wants to act and cannot,then his power has limits.If God both can and wants to,Why does suffering exist?If God neither can nor wants to,Why call him God? Pain persists.Adjust...
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Age old dilemma, for sure. I’ve asked this myself of all sorts of scholarly or “intelligent” people.
I steer clear of knocking the powers of a god-being, because some do indeed have faith in such. More power to them.
But, life has made me quite cynical. Therefore, I choose to believe in power of mankind as the true source of hopeful change.
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Thanks for reading.
I agree entirely with your view particularly that praying sometimes brings solutions though not from a divinity but from ourselves.A peaceful quiet meditation works fine for me…. mostly.
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I like this, and coming from someone who grew up in a conservative faith, as I got older I began to see things differently. Folks change the words to fit the narrative so that they can claim they are backed by divine power. It’s a scary thing.
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Wally; Yep!
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian