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Read More...in the end.......there was nothing to forgive we came as a human dynamic...urgent as fuck..my dominant pressure...your consumer base...spread wide...i penetrated...you gave me that face time, baby i watched you...studied as you emanated...the hues of me ...the blues of me...the bruising of...
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Tourette’s syndrome strikes again, I guess. Haha
Gotta love poetry
Thanks for the energy on this vibe, FiaNaaj
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wow dearest Naajir this is hot organic sex and lust…I’m feeling the poem ❤️
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Glad you felt this…remembrance
Always appreciate your visits, Brenda
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Big thx, bro. This was a fun vibe to write
Much respect always
Naaj
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Haha. Very unique comment. Like your play on words
Thanks for dropping inNaaj
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The picture is bad ass! Then your words come rolling like thunder. I love the rhythm of this, especially. The word build is very, very clever, too. Top tier writing, Naajir. Powerful and entertaining. Memorable, actually.
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Big thx for dropping by, Styxian. This was one of those mood swings
that’s been stewing in the inkwell.Alway appreciate your energy
Much repect
Naaj
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Read MoreWhat becomes of the eyeswhen you linger still?What becomes of the dancewhen you surrender your will? What becomes of the thunderwhen you want to feel the rain?What becomes of pleasurewhen you sing through the pain? What becomes of icewhen you're addicted...
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hello dearest poet great flow and deep questions ❤️
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Thank you. I appreciate you stopping by. 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. Another amazing write with great flow and lots of substance my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You already know I adore this one. The questions land with such clean force, and the cadence pulls me back for another read every time.
I stand by my original comment when I read it the first few times…
“Your questions move like a quiet tide… each one brushing against the edge of longing, change, and the places where certainty slips. There’s a beautiful ache in how you hold opposites together: stillness and motion, fire and ice, surrender and will. It feels like a search for the moment where tension becomes truth, where the self finally meets itself without flinching. I love the way each line leans into that threshold. It lingers with me.” -Curly Grace (Writers Cafe)
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Crimson, your poem reads much of laden sadness and reluctance. Love sometimes becomes distorted and misrepresented in relationships when love, respect, integrity and honesty is not reciprocated.
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it’s true those are vital to a healthy relationship thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can sense a shattered emotional connection.
Decaying miserably, upon disrepair.
Healing is what matters the most going forward. x
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hello lovely Rosie it’s true but sometimes there is no healing I’m schizophrenic and as such I have always accepted less than… thank you for the love on this write ❤️
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thank you dearest Adagio for the love on this ❤️
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Well… the secret realm of just us. (you told the secret) This is really good.