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thank you dearest Adagio most graciously 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you most graciously for such a kind comment 💕
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Hoi hoi
If a poet can be tender, can a poem be tender to?
A declaration of love.
And the four last sentenses the cherry on the cake.
Love it a lot!
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hello dearest Gus good evening I do believe a poem can be tender thank you for your lovely thoughts on this 💕
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thank you graciously lovely Mary 💕
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good evening beautiful poetess thank you graciously 💕
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It is so very human. Gia protect your vulnerability.
Be well-
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hello Jim thank you for a thoughtful and caring comment 💕
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Hi Crimsin. You are very welcomed.
I love your pen name too.
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thank you Jim I chose it a long time ago… I should have had it trademarked but oh well 💕
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Is it too late? 🙂
If I ever see another using it, I’ll threaten a law suit. be well
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Read MoreBlack, white – White, black How many times the rhymes return to: No going backAnd now We have a uniform of nothingness to place upon the form To go out into the storm Like sheep amidst the slaughter. SonDaughter. Sun Moon. Follower Occulted into The cult. Not I: NWP til I Die***Cipher Poems ***
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Superb.
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So are you saying that the uniform, when put on, is a form of accepting an occultist way of being?
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Powerfully penned, Cipher. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreCould you go on If you felt you couldn’t goOn..? Could you be strong if you could no longer be Strong..? Is this the point we reach. As the point of all this..? To be so fucked up You cannot get Up..? Observing the direction existence seems to be swerving for the deserving&Undeserving. I say I...
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Powerfully penned, Cipher. Deep write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreIf the eyes are indeed the windows to the soul then where better to begin the harvest but here in a garden thousands of years from Eden where heathens huddle and scheme using inception to infiltrate our dreams ... ..and so began the fertilization by...
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“a carbon copy of creation’s
carbon based design
debased…defaced
vandalized
soon to erased
by those who would scandalize
the most basic of human interactions
replaced by something
unrecognizable
where hardly anything makes sense
these days simply because
it was meant to make sense
to someone else”Naaj, that last stanza drove it home my friend. Brilliantly penned, and you brought receipts throughout. A Masterpiece, brother. Into the book it belongs! Much respect. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Big big thx, bro. This one brought back memories of when I wrote it.
Much respect
Naaj
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I’d like to bookmark this but I’m not sure if I did or not. Still navigating like a Luddite here lol. I see you’ve been keen to the dark doings for some time. I’m somewhat of a tinfoil hat veteran myself. Once you merge science with spirituality there is no going back, and nothing can ever be unseen. It takes fortitude…and it’s been taking more & more as the years fly. This resonates, thanks for the posting!
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You’re right about merging the spirit and science. That’s great insight. Much appreciation for your thoughts, Benjamin.
Much respect
Naaj
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An excellent observation on the dumbing down of America. People have become subservient to their phones. They don’t ask questions and they don’t think for themselves anymore. Tic Tock has poisoned so many young people alone. Interaction has been minimalized and your line about big brother is so true. We’re being manipulated for someone else’s benefit.
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You’re about Tik Tok. That’s a very dangerous site. Big thx for the support, Tim
Much appreciated.
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Read More1.So now, you seek a primer—after years of painting—Without enough sanding,Drowning in the paradox of colors.2.There is enough paint in here (my heart) to fill that emptiness.I opened it like Pandora’s box.3.Armed to the teeth with brushes and rollers,Stripped...
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Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian! Appreciated! “)
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Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
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External inspiration, internal conversation. 50/50 hehehe. I was painting a wall at home and using the process to write.
Thank you Fia! “)
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Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.
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Thank you brother! I appreciate it! “)
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Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3
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This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.
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Thank you, brother! I appreciate it “)
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Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)
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This is deeply, thought-provoking.
I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.
It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.
Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x
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Vintage Crimsin, at her best. Love it.